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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: 23Diya



No problem...hope u liked it...๐Ÿ˜ณ
may i know ur user name there??๐Ÿ˜Š

i am there as guest...remember i asked a question in my review may be Riya told you abt Guru
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Surprise...๐Ÿ˜ˆ
An Awesome start...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Every Detail was so classically Presented...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Except One...๐Ÿ˜‰
Yes, why Both ACP and ABHIJEET Sir not asking Guard about how He Unlocked that password or he got it with Unlock password and how he knew that boy is Beating by his chacha...?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
did He knew Him personally...?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
if I m not getting Wrong, still Officers did not get DAYA Sir car and also the Cell location in between that Ranjan and guard Call...?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
but really Excellent portrayal...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Specially that FORAN Loud order to VIVEK...โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
it's really going in a Eager way to Wait fir next blast...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Hope U post the next Soon...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ˜†
Excellent execution by Junior...๐Ÿ˜ณโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
Hope U limelight my name... Heheh...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜Ž
Thank You so much Baccha...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: gadhadada


Surprise...๐Ÿ˜ˆ
An Awesome start...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Every Detail was so classically Presented...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Except One...๐Ÿ˜‰
Yes, why Both ACP and ABHIJEET Sir not asking Guard about how He Unlocked that password or he got it with Unlock password and how he knew that boy is Beating by his chacha...?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
did He knew Him personally...?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
if I m not getting Wrong, still Officers did not get DAYA Sir car and also the Cell location in between that Ranjan and guard Call...?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
but really Excellent portrayal...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Specially that FORAN Loud order to VIVEK...โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
it's really going in a Eager way to Wait fir next blast...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Hope U post the next Soon...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ˜†
Excellent execution by Junior...๐Ÿ˜ณโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
Hope U limelight my name... Heheh...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜Ž
Thank You so much Baccha...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ



Double posted...
It always happens with me...๐Ÿ˜’

Aur phir ye ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜‰ Smiley's bhi nhi delete note...
Dusht Smiley's...๐Ÿ˜ก

Edited by 23Diya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: gadhadada


Surprise...๐Ÿ˜ˆ
An Awesome start...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Every Detail was so classically Presented...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Except One...๐Ÿ˜‰
Yes, why Both ACP and ABHIJEET Sir not asking Guard about how He Unlocked that password or he got it with Unlock password and how he knew that boy is Beating by his chacha...?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
did He knew Him personally...?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
if I m not getting Wrong, still Officers did not get DAYA Sir car and also the Cell location in between that Ranjan and guard Call...?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
but really Excellent portrayal...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Specially that FORAN Loud order to VIVEK...โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
it's really going in a Eager way to Wait fir next blast...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Hope U post the next Soon...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ˜†
Excellent execution by Junior...๐Ÿ˜ณโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
Hope U limelight my name... Heheh...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜Ž
Thank You so much Baccha...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ



Hey, that was a copy paste case...
U r caught red handed in this case by junior...๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜‰
BTW, thnx...๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: 23Diya


Hey, that was a copy paste case...
U r caught red handed in this case by junior...๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜‰


wah wah...
ulta Chor Kutwal ko daanty.. humm...๐Ÿ˜ก
U also did Copy/Paste na...๐Ÿค”
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: gadhadada


wah wah...
ulta Chor Kutwal ko daanty.. humm...๐Ÿ˜ก
U also did Copy/Paste na...๐Ÿค”


That is allowed to junior na...warna itna type kerte kerte par thak jaate...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Senior is more taakatwar n can type fast fast...๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sherdilali

i am there as guest...remember i asked a question in my review may be Riya told you abt Guru


Oh yes Riya told me its u...
Hmm...I went through d whole story after that review...๐Ÿ˜†
Sorry could not reply u then๐Ÿ˜ญ
But now I'll come back to this point once I post d next part n eat ur head...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Seeing Hen ji's comment, i went to FF and read the whole๐Ÿ˜‰
Loved the story.โญ๏ธ
Great 1๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: aditya_anjaana

Seeing Hen ji's comment, i went to FF and read the whole๐Ÿ˜‰

Loved the story.โญ๏ธ
Great 1๐Ÿ‘


@bold...Hadd hai...
Cheater...๐Ÿ˜ก

Abb FF k darshan kr hi ayi ho to read the new story too...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Its sort of continuation of this story only...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I'll not post that here...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: 23Diya


Oh yes Riya told me its u...
Hmm...I went through d whole story after that review...๐Ÿ˜†
Sorry could not reply u then๐Ÿ˜ญ
But now I'll come back to this point once I post d next part n eat ur head...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

@bold tou phr kia pata chala?
how will you come to this point now Will you mention about it in next part
Edited by sherdilali - 10 years ago

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