Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48)

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Shilpam56

@Shilpam56

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Posted: 7 years ago

#291

Kafi time baad aapke hath se type kiye huye chappy padhe hai...

Bohith aacha laga, n probably realistic too...

Aage bhi type kigiye ga, and post kigiye taki hum jaise sarif bande padh kar maze le sakte hai...

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23Diya

@23Diya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: Athene
Wow very nicely written Diya. And I could totally imagine Abhijeet thinking all that just like you wrote it.

Thanks Shreya for taking the time out to read and review.😃

Happy to hear you liked it.

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23Diya

@23Diya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: Shilpam56
Kafi time baad aapke hath se type kiye huye chappy padhe hai...
Bohith aacha laga, n probably realistic too...
Aage bhi type kigiye ga, and post kigiye taki hum jaise sarif bande padh kar maze le sakte hai...

Ji, kafi waqt baad likha hai. 😛

Aur acha laga jaan ker ki aapko pasand aaya.😳

Likh to aap bhi sakte hai. Par humari itni kismat kaha ki apki stories parhne ko mile.

Edited by 23Diya - 7 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#294

Absolutely fantastic. I could feel the Abhijeet I know, the Daya I know, the ACP I know... I am using this smiley after such a long time. They need to take you as the story writer and bring back those sweet moments in CID.

I am so inspired to try my hand at a story or OS, if I get time. 😛

Thank you so much.

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: visrom
Absolutely fantastic. I could feel the Abhijeet I know, the Daya I know, the ACP I know... I am using this smiley after such a long time. They need to take you as the story writer and bring back those sweet moments in CID.
I am so inspired to try my hand at a story or OS, if I get time. 😛
Thank you so much.

Thanks a lot Di. 😃

It really means a lot to me that you liked it so much.

@bold, I think it would be better if they take you, Shreya and some of the better writers for the investigative part and I...well I can be the sweet moment specialist. How does that sound?😆

@italics, Now that sounds wonderful. I'll be waiting for a story from you soon.😛

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#296

I was looking for a particular episode for inspiration. I only remember a scene but nobody remembers the episode name for me to search for it. 😆

I wrote a few lines and I am posting it in a new thread so that I am motivated to continue.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4949325

Edited by visrom - 7 years ago

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Swathi

@swathi17

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#297

Okay Diya di...

Finally done with the story...

Well, I have no words left to say how I had felt after reading it...

I just lived the moment, being a silent witness of whatever was happening...

Keep writing more... 🤗

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: visrom
I was looking for a particular episode for inspiration. I only remember a scene but nobody remembers the episode name for me to search for it. 😆

I wrote a few lines and I am posting it in a new thread so that I am motivated to continue.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4949325

@bold, I thought for once that the story you posted was the one you are talking about but I've read it and it seems a new story. Which scene are you talking about. Can you tell me?

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: swathi17
Okay Diya di...
Finally done with the story...
Well, I have no words left to say how I had felt after reading it...
I just lived the moment, being a silent witness of whatever was happening...
Keep writing more... 🤗

Your no words tells me everything I needed to hear. And your emojis.😛

I love to use emoji and its lovely when a reader finds my own stories good enough to use it. 😆😆

Thanks Swathi for reading and letting me know that you liked the story.😳