Story : Abhijeet Ke Ateet Ka (Asli) Raaz - Page 5

Originally posted by: Bhavanab

Just finished reading and I found this absolutely amazing!!! Loved it really ... I'll definitely post a detailed opinion in the morning.. Couldn't resist from mentioning that I loved it :)

Thanks for reading. 😊 Waiting for your comments.

Originally posted by: DemonStar

this is an FW-type OTT drama, because it is the complete opposite. Thank you so much for this wonderful story, and looking forward to many more. 👏 👏 😃

I did use the resignation scene, Abhijeet asking ACP and Daya to leave his house etc, didn't I? 😆

It was a good read vis di 😛
Thank You! 😃
Everyone else already gave a detailed review (-_^)
Just one doubt.. why did you think Abhijeet was faking his anger?😕

Originally posted by: iMini

It was a good read vis di 😛
Thank You! 😃
Everyone else already gave a detailed review (-_^)
Just one doubt.. why did you think Abhijeet was faking his anger?😕

When?

Originally posted by: visrom

When?

Like that part where you wrote something like Abhijeet couldn't fake his anger anymore because his heart melted seeing daya's concern for him..something like this

Yeah. ..there was no reason for him to get angry. They had good reason to send him home didn't they?

Originally posted by: visrom

Yeah. ..there was no reason for him to get angry. They had good reason to send him home didn't they?

Yes they did of course,but I interpreted it as it was his own stress,frustration, confusion,guilt and fear of the unknown which made Abhijeet angry at anyone who seemed like not understanding his situation.

Originally posted by: iMini

Yes they did of course,but I interpreted it as it was his own stress,frustration, confusion,guilt and fear of the unknown which made Abhijeet angry at anyone who seemed like not understanding his situation.

He was the one being pig headed and not revealing anything to Daya. How can he expect Daya to understand anything if he refused to tell? Daya asked many times didn't he? how can Daya read his dreams?

Abhijeet is not an unreasonable fool to get angry without reason. so I made it look like he's only faking anger.


And yeah, I changed a few things because this is my version and I wanted it to be like that. So take it as a work of fiction 😆. I am not trying to explsin what FW showed. I am creating my story around what they showed the way I want Abhijeet to behave.