Story : Abhijeet Ke Ateet Ka (Asli) Raaz

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Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Will read very soon, Vis. I went through it and it looks really awesome already. 😃

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1.KRITTIKA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Parte waqt bhi tnsn tha kahi snr inspctr Abhijeet ko khooni to nahi banane wale aap..
bt atlast relieved 😊
much much better than FW... 👏
specially the part Daya sorting out the matter and u even put some light on that bar case..aj taq to FW ne use raaj hi bana rakha 😔

nicely written fully compact
thank you ⭐️

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visrom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Thanks Krittika for being the first to comment. 😊

'compact'? it was 36 pages long! 😆

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Gamayun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Vis di this was amazing! I loved how you didn't just say everything in a dialogue, but actually showed us a flashback. And the way you showed it really helped me visualize the scenes as well.

I'm much more happier with this than I was with the original. Kaash FW ka dimak chalta aur woh bhi kuch aisa dikha dete.

Thank you so much for this Vis di!

Edited by CT_Shreya - 10 years ago

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Mini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Thank you so much for giving me something to read that too about Abhijeet..and that too for free 😃
Gotta read this..

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gadhadada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

I m really Sorry DII...

Ill Read it after EID and give U My Reviews after Eid...

Hope U Forgive Me for such Delay...

Thanks in Advance...😊

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Super story...

Well investigated...👏

Dilip's secret and Abhijeet's problem was much more better than FW.

The doctor was part very nice👏

I was expecting something like this...instead of Maya type doctor...

Overall a very nice story...and truly Ateet ka raaz⭐️

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1.KRITTIKA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: visrom
Thanks Krittika for being the first to comment. 😊

'compact'? it was 36 pages long! 😆

10 epi long with nothing actually in it se to bahut jyada compact tha 😉

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visrom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: aditya_anjaana
Super story...
Well investigated...👏

Dilip's secret and Abhijeet's problem was much more better than FW.

The doctor was part very nice👏

I was expecting something like this...instead of Maya type doctor...

Overall a very nice story...and truly Ateet ka raaz⭐️

Thanks for reading and commenting. 😃