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Menrva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: misha.as

😃

😆 ye kuch jayada to nahi ho gaya na snehal di ke leye na... 😉 😆

Jo huya acha huya. Now I got my revenge.

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Menrva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Soni.
Really superb story Shreya. 👏 The plot and concept was extremely good. Every officer was good in there role. Disguise of the lady officers were even better. Rajat's farewell scene was done brilliantly by you. 👍🏼 Just hoped that FW should have at least mentioned him leaving. Kids and there parents emotions were very sweetly portrayed. You forgot about me though. 😒 I liked how you changed the personality of Ravi, Debashree, Misha, Neha and Snehal. They all were protryed fantastically. ACP sir was extra angry at Snehal and I liked that. Overall it was a fantastic story and you did a wonderful job.

Ah thank you Soni. 😃

I didn't forget you. I had you in my last story. Remember? 😉

Hehe...chalo at least someone loved ACP sir's anger at Snehal. 😆

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-SNEHAL-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

😭 Shreya tune mera dil tod diya yaar 😭

And Deba? What's this? Mujhe criminal banane keliye tum jimmedar ho! 😒

😆

On serious note.. I really liked this one. And thank you shreya for making me a part of your story second time. Lekin a villain wo bhi pakde jaane wala - isko Mein na Bhoolongi 😉

I didn't find this story upto your other stories mark or may be i got affected cause i saw similar episode in crime petrol.

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-SNEHAL-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Soni.
Really superb story Shreya. 👏 The plot and concept was extremely good. Every officer was good in there role. Disguise of the lady officers were even better. Rajat's farewell scene was done brilliantly by you. 👍🏼 Just hoped that FW should have at least mentioned him leaving. Kids and there parents emotions were very sweetly portrayed. You forgot about me though. 😒 I liked how you changed the personality of Ravi, Debashree, Misha, Neha and Snehal. They all were protryed fantastically. ACP sir was extra angry at Snehal and I liked that. Overall it was a fantastic story and you did a wonderful job.

What do you mean by this? 😲

El toh bechari mein. Deba ne criminal bana diya aur fir ACP sir ka gussa. Aur bhagte hue takrayi bhi toh Daya sir se. Kaash kisi aur se takrati 😉

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Menrva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: snehal.
😭 Shreya tune mera dil tod diya yaar 😭
And Deba? What's this? Mujhe criminal banane keliye tum jimmedar ho! 😒

😆

On serious note.. I really liked this one. And thank you shreya for making me a part of your story second time. Lekin a villain wo bhi pakde jaane wala - isko Mein na Bhoolongi 😉

I didn't find this story upto your other stories mark or may be i got affected cause i saw similar episode in crime petrol.

Tod diya naa. Acha hai.

Why are you blaming Sree? You're at fault that you didn't think about your well-being and the fact that you would be caught. 😆

This story was based on what I saw in Crime Patrol yaar. But thank you. And I'll bring my better stories back. 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Now i can say "Cannibal" more. Ab mujhe dar nahi, dil pehlehi tut gaya hai 🤣

And if not deba then it's your fault to make me such a stupid criminal to get caught

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Menrva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: snehal.
Now i can say "Cannibal" more. Ab mujhe dar nahi, dil pehlehi tut gaya hai 🤣
And if not deba then it's your fault to make me such a stupid criminal to get caught

Toh kya? You wanted to be a Don? 😎 Or maybe you were hoping to be James Bond. 😆