CID Story: The Slave Trade - Page 2

Originally posted by: .nightqueen

Wow its a suspicious detective story 😃 my fav 😳👏

loved the 1st part , looking forward to more .

btw can u please update with english translations 😳 as i find it hard to read hindi

sorry if i hurt you 😊

Originally posted by: snehal.

Hey bhagwaan!! Meri band kyun yaar?

M i the criminal? Lekin agar ho toh Don wala criminal banana. Snehal ko pakdna mushkil hi nahi na mumkin hai!! Mu ha ha ha ha 😈

FW wala har samay rone wala criminal nahi haan..

Bura banana hi hai toh sabse bura 😈

@Angel Dekh na yaar.. Ye shreya cannibal bangayi hai!! 🤣

@Shreya Oh okk.. No sorry. I will read it after 2nd 😉😆

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Shreya di aap ek choti si, pyari si Angel ko yeh sab de rahi ho..galat bat hai na yeh toh..
Cannibal..!! How Snehal di?

Originally posted by: gadhadada

SHERYU, I read it Yesternight so Be Prepare for My Critical Feedback...😈 GD tumhare critical feedback ki wajah se hi meri stories achi hoti rehti hain. 😉

First the Song borrowed by You was Good and Disclaimer was also Nice...👏

First U changed the Characters of RAVI and NEHA..😉 Of course I did. I wasn't going to keep them as officers. 😆

Quite Confusing for Me...😕

Now back to Story, Honestly Boss, Story was So So...😵

Totally Absent SHERYA Flair... Shreya flair? Wah yeh toh pehli baar suna hai. Lekin acha laga sun kar ke mera bhi ek style hai. Agli baar will work on that. 😃

Plot was OK, does not having any New Aspect and Touch...

its Very Regular...😆

Everyone Caught so Easily...😉😆

U gives Very Less Screen Space to DEBA, MISHA, SNEHAL, NEHA , MISHA and RAVI...😒 Oye yeh CID story hai, CIDian story nahi. 😆

I enjoyed SNEHAL Point that why She was against and shakes hand with Laila...😉👏👏 Dekha Snehal. GD ko bhi tum ek achi criminal lagi. 😆

yani Usy Jurm ki Dunya mein Dhakelnay wala Koi aur nahi, DEBASHREE hay...🤣 Haww...yeh toh maine socha hi nahi. 🤣

I loved how LAILA cut Off Money from Crore to 50 Lacs with Cutting of Work...😉👏

LALLAN Singh Catch was also little Undigestable for Me as He already Experiece Jail and He knew that His Address was in Database so why He again choose that Place for Visit/Staying... Kuch criminals idiots hote hain. 🤣

Same with His Cell SMS, as mostly people using Different SIMS or Cell Set for this Purpose...

I really Like to Read it but Not find Something Crisp, Gripped and All...😊😊

I am Extremelly Sorry if I Hurt U and any of Ur Fans but I hope U accepted All My Points with Open Heart and Ignores POPAT Badtameezi to gives U such Critical FB...😊😊 Sorry kaha. 😡 Page 2 padho. 😡 Feedback ke liye kabhi sorry maat kaho. Yeh feedback ki wajah se main aur acha likhne ki koshish karti hoon. 🤗

Thank You so much for this...🤗

Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya