CID Story: The Slave Trade - Page 3

Originally posted by: visrom

Nice story Shreya. Even you have Rajat a nice farewell. 👍🏼


I wish they had shown something like this on screen too. At least a good bye scene.

I am reading this late sorry dear will read and reply soon

Awesome as always Sri 😃

Finally read your story after a really looonnnggg time.. 😃😆

Originally posted by: Reshma.

Finally read your story after a really looonnnggg time.. 😃😆

No sorry boss. I'm not ready for punches 😆😆

Jokes apart.. Coming to the story..

Liked how you ingeniously used and framed our CIDian characters like deab, misha, neha and Ravi 😃

And snehal... poor thing..😆 But very nicely brought out 😊

As usual, the writing style was superb and it really added to the investigations, assumptions. 👏👏

Great story Shreyu 😃

awesome story with lovely characters 👏

First of all a big thank you for giving me a sweet and caring character...😃 🤗
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And about the story it was really very nice Shreya di...⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
All did fantastic job... ⭐️👏
Intersting story...👏 ⭐️
Feeling sad 😆 for snehal di...😆
Rajat sir farewell was awesome.⭐️ ⭐️
Once again...


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Originally posted by: misha.as

First of all a big thank you for giving me a sweet and caring character...😃 🤗
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And about the story it was really very nice Shreya di...⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
All did fantastic job... ⭐️👏
Intersting story...👏 ⭐️
Feeling sad 😆 for snehal di...😆
Rajat sir farewell was awesome.⭐️ ⭐️
Once again...


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Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

First of all thank you!🤗

Second...why is everyone feeling sorry for Snehal? She deserved it after her cannibal comments.😆

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😆 ye kuch jayada to nahi ho gaya na snehal di ke leye na... 😉 😆

Really superb story Shreya. 👏 The plot and concept was extremely good. Every officer was good in there role. Disguise of the lady officers were even better. Rajat's farewell scene was done brilliantly by you. 👍🏼 Just hoped that FW should have at least mentioned him leaving. Kids and there parents emotions were very sweetly portrayed. You forgot about me though. 😒 I liked how you changed the personality of Ravi, Debashree, Misha, Neha and Snehal. They all were protryed fantastically. ACP sir was extra angry at Snehal and I liked that. Overall it was a fantastic story and you did a wonderful job.