ANNIVERSARY SPECIAl Combine Project of VISROM and GD.!(PG:3/4)

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
OMG..😲😲!! Even such great writers of our forum are inspired by FW in giving title to their story..🤣🤣.

Dekh lo...😉😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Dekh lo...😉😆😆

Kisay ya phir kya dekhun 😉?

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
Kisay ya phir kya dekhun 😉?

Main hun Dekhny ki Cheez

Mujhy Baar Baar Dekh...😉😉

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Aapko dekhne ka story title se kya lena dena hai Dada😕?

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
Aapko dekhne ka story title se kya lena dena hai Dada😕?

Shock Kum lagay ga...😉

OTTness aur Loopholes bhi Story mein Kum lagein gay Baccha...😆😆

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ControlledChaos

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Hmmm.. good attempt..
nice idea Vis di.. 😊
total FW style.. thappad pd ke chair pr gire bhi honge.. aur robot ki tarha fat fat bolna bhi start kr diya hog hena😆
nice investigation.. liked the way your tried to make everyone indulge in this .
And ya.. title ki daad deni padegi.. 😆 Waah...
Really liked the way Badey Bhai took everything in his command... and wow nice googling.. you did a very impressive job..
and oh DCP.. *jb jb ata h kuch na kuch krke jata h* 😆 Hr baar poora utarta h... but chalen atleast he apologized this time... otherwise uski shaan ke khilaaf h na😡
and Bhai.. ooh.. hahahahaha love that Devil emotion.. n Badey bhai's reply seengh kaat dunga.. *something like that* 😆 but liked that part very much.. Bhaiii.. nice thinking hmmm... 😉
You did a really great job Bhaijaan...
hope to see mannyyy more stories from you in near future...
good luck..
ese hi dhamake phodte raha kariye.. 😆
God bless 🤗

Edited by DUOlover123 - 11 years ago

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: gadhadada

🤣 I thought Aap saheh mein Bol rahy ho...
😲😲😲 Itna Bara Dhoka...
Wo bhi GD Parrot kay sath...😉😉😉

GD Parrot dhokha dene wali cheez hai isli. 🤣

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Firstly title kuch lamba nahi FW ishtyle ke liye? I mean FW ke titles toh aaj kal zada se zada teen yah chaar shabd ke hote hain. It would have better if you wrote Daya Aur ACP Ka Raaz. 🤣

Shagnika ki story baad main parongi pehle toh yeh parna zaroori tha. 🤣

Waise idea bhadiya tha Vis di.

GD ka FW ishtyle ko copy kiya hai. Thappad maara aur fatak se chair pe gira. 🤣

Google...grr...actually I mean awesome!!!

Badey bhai aur bhai ka mast the!

DCP ko kyun laaye? Woh naa aata toh acha hota. 😡

And here you were saying ke tum ab stories nahi likhoge. Agli baar aisa kaha toh jaise bhai ke saath katti hai waise tumhare saath bhi kar loongi main. 😡 🤣

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Forfriend

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

the title of the story is too much comedy BH 😆

the the sing kat dunga tunhare was the punch line 😉

story overall very nice per yaar aap ka punch nahi tha... haan but I know its ur and Visrom story toh ypu written according to her...

full of Investigation... and you really write it too well... Abhijeet as second in Command and Daya doing all investigation and all things... just too good... and ya nice research for the story too...

About the Plot... Visrom really nice and interesting Plot...👏

and Ya thank god it did not turn like a FW episode... jinke promo unnkkee epi se jada ache hote hai...

your Story is much better that your PRomo ⭐️