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swagatamghosh94

@swagatamghosh94

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: debasree04
First of all how its Demonghosh's first story 😕
As far i know already u wrote one story - CID KI Jung Aliens Ke Sang

That was written by Ravi bro and Srishti. So it was DemonSingh actually.😃

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: swagatamghosh94

That was written by Ravi bro and Srishti. So it was DemonSingh actually.😃

upps...so sorry my mistake...😳
I am adding to the archive now.

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swagatamghosh94

@swagatamghosh94

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: debasree04

upps...so sorry my mistake...😳
I am adding to the archive now.

No problem.😃

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

First of all, A Big Big Congrats to Two Big Writers of IF...👏👏

SWAGATAM as its Ur First Attempt, I proudly said, Its one of the Bestest Story posted at IF Platform...⭐️⭐️

Yes I found Ur Flavor in this Story much and understand that DEMONSTAR only played a role of Positive and Reactive Catalyst here...😉👏👏

Absolutely Fabulous buildup of Story with Proper Pros and Cons and the Execution really create Image infront of Reader eyes...👏⭐️👏

I really enjoyed RESHMI and RAJIV characters as Culprits, Excillently well...👏👏

there Calm and Composed gestures, Executions of Plan so Swiftly and there End, a Best Highlight of Ur Whole Story...⭐️⭐️

Absolutely Classical New TRIO in town as Inspector RAVI KRISHNA, SHIRISTI and RESHMA👏👏...

I really Enjoyed them, their Bonding and especially RAVI character which U portrayed excillently Well Baccha...👏👏

Its really Nice to see the Interest in Literature and Current Realation of those Notes sent by Culprit which Progress the Case in Proper manner...👏👏

I really Like that U completely sidelined the CID team which was the Best thing cz give and Uniqness in Ur Story...👏👏

The Interrogation with SIBLINGS reminds me some Best of Interrogation...⭐️⭐️

The Flair of Surrounding, Specific Foods U mentioned, way of Harmoney really bound the Reader in Smooth ways...😛👏👏

Now come to GD style...😈

OML! RAVI, U are a Chain Smoker😲... Very Bad... and why stuck only on One Brand... Taste some others too...😉😆

RAVI character was Best in all, His attitude, Body Language, accent, Comments, rashness, Calmness, Coolness...⭐️⭐️

As I am Not very much Interact with RESHMA but I felt that U much portrayed Her Composed either I found Her little Normal...😊👏

U presented SHRISTI character Correctly some how She was always in Hurry to Express Her Feelings... 😆👏

SWAGATAM, I did not like the character of Inspector GHOSH which U portrayed as I though that U portrayed Ur Character there but really in a Hurtful manner, Yes the way U portrayed Ur Outlook and the way all Three (RAVI, RESHMA and SHRISTI) thought about that Character, Way of Interact either the Scold of RAVI really Hurts Me...😭😭

Ok, as the Case from Delhi to Kolkata only handled by POLICE so why KOLKATA Police Commissioner contacted CID of MUMBAI as I knew its High Rated case but any of Team must raise that Point and then they contacted na...😉😉

CID team arrived but without any proper Meeting just start to Search the TAJ MAHAL Hotel looking little Weird...

The Chase was little Dragged either why SIBLINGS did not think that Forces must Check on them, its really unacceptable to think such Silly stupidity from some Masterminds...😲😲👎🏼

Why CID Team did not Search the Background after the Interrogation with TWINS as now its easy to Verified them with AADHAR CARD Uplink Data na...😒

Its Nice that atleast at Last Flight CID team and NEW TRIO exchanged Some of their Options about the Culprits such Brutal Attempt, I knew its almost Impossible to read Minds but somehow they must Discussed each one according to their Aspect with the Background of those Letters... 😃😃

NOTE: I must say U have a Smooth Future and DEMONSINGH I really really Enjoyed and Appologize with DEMONSTAR, SWAGATAM, RESHMA and SHRISTI as anyone find any Bad thing from My Feedback, its just My Personal Opinion...😊😊

Thank You for such a Masterpiece...👏⭐️👏

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swagatamghosh94

@swagatamghosh94

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Thanks Popat ji for your detailed feedback. Will keep them in mind for the future.😃

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Gamayun

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

+ 55

Team Silver Trio

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Dono Swagatam and Ravi are being modest. Putting the work on the other's shoulder. 😆

Chalo will try to read this soon as well though not sure when...😊

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Congratulations DemonGhosh on your very own story corner 👏 🥳

Just read few lines and it looks very promising. I am busy now but weekend pe pakka padhungi 😃

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Srishti

@Srishti.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

swagatam bhai are u sure you are not related to Paulo Coleho and Agatha Christie or like dat!😛

Amazing yaar👏👏

couldnt read the whole story will do soon!😃

Aww Srishti , Ravi and Reshma! An honour Swagatam bhai! Inspector Swagatam kahan hai😆

Oh man please give me writing classes brother😳😉

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swagatamghosh94

@swagatamghosh94

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Srishti.
swagatam bhai are u sure you are not related to Paulo Coleho and Agatha Christie or like dat!😛
Amazing yaar👏👏
couldnt read the whole story will do soon!😃
Aww Srishti , Ravi and Reshma! An honour Swagatam bhai! Inspector Swagatam kahan hai😆
Oh man please give me writing classes brother😳😉

Mishti ji read the whole story. Inspector Ghosh is present in a different way!!😉