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swagatamghosh94

@swagatamghosh94

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Srishti.

kya baat bane bhai😉

Hehe aap padh lijiye Mishti. Hopefully you will laugh at Inspector Ghosh!!😆😉

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: swagatamghosh94

Hehe aap padh lijiye Mishti. Hopefully you will laugh at Inspector Ghosh!!😆😉

A painful Laugh...😭

It's really Hurting for Readers and SWAGATAM, I m damn Sure, everyone would Complain U abt that...

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Finally read this story.

This has more of cidians than the regular cid team. The investigation is interesting if we keep our cid aside and think of this as a simple murder story.

But a completely missing Daya and very less ACP is a bit tough to digest.

The writers' admiration towards Ansha/Purvi is evident. 😆 NIce to see a Purvi centric story which has no emotional drama.

Just one suggestion.try to make the characters' names unique. A Reshma and a Reshmi were confusing at times.

Hoping to see more from you.

Edited by visrom - 11 years ago

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swagatamghosh94

@swagatamghosh94

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: visrom
Finally read this story.

This has more of cidians than the regular cid team. The investigation is interesting if we keep our cid aside and think of this as a simple murder story.

But a completely missing Daya and very less ACP is a bit tough to digest.

The writers' infatuation with Ansha/Purvi is evident. 😆 NIce to see a Purvi centric story which has no emotional drama.

Just one suggestion.try to make the characters' names unique. A Reshma and a Reshmi were confusing at times.

Hoping to see more from you.

Thank you so much for the detailed feedback Vis di. Means a lot to us.

Sorry to disappoint you but this was intended to be a a Abhijeet-Purvi investigation, along with the Cidians.

Suggestion taken regarding the names.😃

One more thing Vis di. We are not 'infatuated' with Purvi or Ansha. We just respect and love her a lot as a person and as an actress. Just clearing that up. Hope you aren't offended. Thanks again Vis di.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

That's ok swagatham...I don't mean it in any offensive way too. I was imagining Ravi Krishna tongue tied in front of Ansha and that's the picture that formed before my mind eye. ! 😆 Nothing wrong admiring an actor/actress. Even I had crushes on many people..That's ok. 😉

ok I'll take back my word. I'll edit my post.

Edited by visrom - 11 years ago

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swagatamghosh94

@swagatamghosh94

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Thank you so much Vis di.😃

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@ANGELICEYES

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Sorry I am late to give my feedback😛..
The story was lovely⭐️⭐️.. Decent investigation👏..
As Vis di said I too missed Daya sir and ACP sir..
Loved how you incorporated Lucknow and Kolkata⭐️⭐️.. Nice to see CIDIANs' names here..interesting😛😛..
Ravi Krishna to Robi Krishno🤣.. Nice idea😆..
Btw, Aap dono me se story plot kiska hai or writing kiska hai😉? Dono ne ek dusre ko sara credit diya hai..kuch samajh nahi aa raha😆.. I am feeling Swagatam Dadabhai wrote it though I can be wrong😛.

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

I m extremely sorry...now i really have no time to read the story. But i will surely read it soon. Sorry !!!

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misha.as

@misha.as

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

I m very very sorry for late bro, i forget abt it ...
so sorry...

Amazing story bro... ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
Nice to see CIDIANs' names here.. ⭐️
Purvi centric story with emotional drama...
very interesting .. ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
waiting for more... 👍🏼 😊

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Reshma

@Reshh16

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Hello you there.. Kya kar diya yar.. I loved the story and flow was simply amazing.. 👏

It was an easy to catch and light-mooded story. Great job..👏

I'm imagining myself cold at the thought of meeting them.. And the plane scene where I admire Abhijeet sighing relaxedly was ☺️.. I was imagining it all over..😳