DEMONGHOSH STORY CORNER : The Master and the Apprentice - Page 3

Originally posted by: Srishti.

kya baat bane bhai😉

Originally posted by: swagatamghosh94

Hehe aap padh lijiye Mishti. Hopefully you will laugh at Inspector Ghosh!!😆😉

Finally read this story.


This has more of cidians than the regular cid team. The investigation is interesting if we keep our cid aside and think of this as a simple murder story.

But a completely missing Daya and very less ACP is a bit tough to digest.


The writers' admiration towards Ansha/Purvi is evident. 😆 NIce to see a Purvi centric story which has no emotional drama.

Just one suggestion.try to make the characters' names unique. A Reshma and a Reshmi were confusing at times.

Hoping to see more from you.

Originally posted by: visrom

Finally read this story.


This has more of cidians than the regular cid team. The investigation is interesting if we keep our cid aside and think of this as a simple murder story.

But a completely missing Daya and very less ACP is a bit tough to digest.


The writers' infatuation with Ansha/Purvi is evident. 😆 NIce to see a Purvi centric story which has no emotional drama.

Just one suggestion.try to make the characters' names unique. A Reshma and a Reshmi were confusing at times.

Hoping to see more from you.

That's ok swagatham...I don't mean it in any offensive way too. I was imagining Ravi Krishna tongue tied in front of Ansha and that's the picture that formed before my mind eye. ! 😆 Nothing wrong admiring an actor/actress. Even I had crushes on many people..That's ok. 😉

ok I'll take back my word. I'll edit my post.

Thank you so much Vis di.😃

Sorry I am late to give my feedback😛..
The story was lovely⭐️⭐️.. Decent investigation👏..
As Vis di said I too missed Daya sir and ACP sir..
Loved how you incorporated Lucknow and Kolkata⭐️⭐️.. Nice to see CIDIANs' names here..interesting😛😛..
Ravi Krishna to Robi Krishno🤣.. Nice idea😆..
Btw, Aap dono me se story plot kiska hai or writing kiska hai😉? Dono ne ek dusre ko sara credit diya hai..kuch samajh nahi aa raha😆.. I am feeling Swagatam Dadabhai wrote it though I can be wrong😛.

I m extremely sorry...now i really have no time to read the story. But i will surely read it soon. Sorry !!!

I m very very sorry for late bro, i forget abt it ...
so sorry...



Amazing story bro... ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
Nice to see CIDIANs' names here.. ⭐️
Purvi centric story with emotional drama...
very interesting .. ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
waiting for more... 👍🏼 😊

Hello you there.. Kya kar diya yar.. I loved the story and flow was simply amazing.. 👏