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Posted: 12 years ago
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BINOD... very Excillent First Attempt...👏
Somehow a Fast Track Speed gives Grip...👏
Suspense really Maintained Good...👏
ASCII Codes Idea was Nice...👏
waiting for Part 2...👍🏼
Thank You ...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just noticed this..
Hmm nice as being your first attempt.
Good going
Waiting for the second part.
God bless..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Nice story. Plz pm me frm next if possible.

thanks..
U told me to pm..but i m quite confused.u mean to pm story or link.plz say.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gadhadada



<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">BINOD... very Excillent First Attempt...👏</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">Somehow a Fast Track Speed gives Grip...👏</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">Suspense really Maintained Good...👏</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">ASCII Codes Idea was Nice...👏</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">waiting for Part 2...👍🏼</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">Thank You ...😳</font>

thank u very much..will try my best in second part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Just noticed this..
Hmm nice as being your first attempt.
Good going
Waiting for the second part.
God bless..😊

thank u ...will post second part soon..but it my took some as i have to edit it on mobile.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Binod a very nice first story. A good amount of suspense and team distribution. Waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#006600">Binod a very nice first story. A good amount of suspense and team distribution. Waiting for the next part!</font>

thank u very much...will try to post soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start, good suspense..team distributed well but thoda sa bhagam bhag types tha, nyways gud job..
all d best for 2nd part👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosepink.

Nice start, good suspense..team distributed well but thoda sa bhagam bhag types tha, nyways gud job..
all d best for 2nd part👍🏼

thank u for the suggestions i will do my best to improve it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Binod, just read the 3 parts. I have one doubt...why did Abhijeet think that ACP's life might be in danger? They had not got any solid information till then, right?

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