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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome... Promo seems promising... Waiting eagerly boss
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to the writing club Binod. 😃

A nice promo. Looking forward to the story! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Editing process is going on, will complete after some hours and will post here up to tomorrow.
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Plz i need your's precious suggestions and truthful suggestion.
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story - acp target

scene 1: at bureau
"acp sir is on the way to
bureau" ,freddy sir explained to
rajat sir.(after some...seconds...)
rajat sir said"magar abhijeet sir
aur daya sir abitak kue nahi aaye
hamesa to ouh dono jaldi ate the
per aj kya hua."
freddy sir : jarurr kisi kam me
fase yoge muse lagtahe ouh doto
bhi atey hi hoge.
rajat: but we have to move to
sachin's birthday party.
(acp sir enters the bureau)
"everything is ready";
rajat : "yes sir, we r ready to go
to party but till now abhijeet sir
and daya sir has not arrive.
acp sir:i just made a call with
them before some minutes and
they r on the way.they will meet
us directly in the party.
scene 2: daya sir's van
abhijeet sir and daya sir r
discussing about the days they
has spent cid, recalling past and
so on. accidently daya sir get a
call.
daya sir : ha...ok. ham pouchte
hai.
abhijeet sir : kya hua daya.
daya sir : boss ek lass mili ye
jungle me.
abhijeet sir : ok! let's move there.
daya sir: i will make a call to acp
sir.
abhijeet sir : i think we should
not call b coz they r enjoying in
the party and why we distrub
them!
daya sir: then we'll move there
towards murder spot
abhijeet sir: ok
scene 3: at murder spot.
both abhijeet sir and daya sir
arrived.they examined the body
but found nothing. no wound,
no sign of bullet and both fell as
if they r in confused. (daya sir in
a deep thinking)
abhijeet sir :what happened
daya?any problems?
daya sir: boss! do u remember.
he is the one, grish who was
caughted before 12 years in
ascussed of 1 murder and was
proved murderer.actually he was
a prisoner court has declared
hang punishment.
abhijeet sir : but how he escaped
from jail? call the ambulance and
sent the body to forensic lab till
then, i will examine surrounding.
daya sir : but may be salunke sir
has already forwarded his plan
to go to birthday party.
abhijeet sir: oh! no he is going
late. 10 minutes hence, i called
tarika and she told me that
salunke sir has some work in lab.
daya sir: (naughtly) tarika se calll...
scene 4: at the lab
salunke sir running here and there frequently podering about the body.tarika on the other side doing task on the lab.(abhi-daya entering the lab)
abhijeet sir: what happens salunke sir, kue ap ko hawa nikalgaye...(laughting)
salunke sir : are boss. nothing is found except a piece of paper.it is given that.656780

daya sir: but what is it? it seems like as if murderer is playing a game with us?
abhijeet sir: (get a call) ok we will be there. salunke sir, we will have to move as call comformed that murder took place again in 20 km from the first murder spot till then try to find maximum evidiences. let's go daya.

scene 5: murder spot
daya sir: in the first spot we daidn't find anybody and who call us. it's a same case repeating here. what is it?
abhijeet sir: ya , exactly. found nothing. no wound, no sign of bullet.ok saluke sir could find something.
they both probator here and there but could find nothing.


scene 6: at bureau
abhijeet sir and daya sir felt a big confusion.
"when call to mobile company the address which they revealed are wrong, how could it be" daya sir wonders.he added," both are crimials caught by us.now both of them have just been relesed from jail and both are murdered"
abhiheet sir: exactly, ye code ka chakkar jya he daya. till now we have just got one clue that paper which written 656780 . let's see what salunke sir will find from the second body.
salunke sir :(entering the bureau) i found a piece of paper similar the first one but its wriltten 846582716984. both of them were given too much sleeping tablets and were killed which i found after the completion of examine both body.
Edited by binod.abhijeet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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scene 7: at cid van
it's almost evening
cid team r coming from the sachin's birthdar party. acp sir at the front sharing beautiful moment they spent at the party.rajat sir at the driving seat recalling the moment of party and sharing with the team.
freddy and sachin sir at the back seat. sachin sir thanks all for making the birthday so special.
sachin sir: i would have been the best if abhijeet sir and daya sir has also been to party.
freedy sir : they both have given this surprise party for sachin sir and they themselves r absent.
acp sir: ya it's a disappointing espacially for sachin.anways, my home is near by i will get out of the van here. rajat,drop them their home ok.
rajit sir: yes sir


scene 8: at the bureau
it's a late night. both r working.serarchig the evidences. trying their best to find out truth regarding the code 656780 and 8465827 but could foud nothing.
( the morning) acp sir coming towards bureau.
acp sir :aree abhijeet-daya. it's so early u both came here in the bureau. by, the way why did u absent at the party. we were missing u both.
( freddy sir, rajat sir and sachin sir at bureau doing some masti, pulling leg each other's)
abhijeet sir and daya sir revealed the events which has happened the previous day.
(acp sir scold them saying how could they hide such a huge matter daya sir said ,"we didn't want to be the cause of striking the party.we ourselves gave a party and we end it. how could it be possible sir".
abhijeet sir: sorry sir
acp sir : then let's forward the case.
(acp sir received a call which state that muder took place)

scene 9: at the murder spot
daya sir rajat sir and freddy sir at the murder spot.
daya sir: search the surrounding there could be some evidences which murderer has left.
(after sometime) daya sir notices that the dead bdy is similar to the first and secnd one, (that means no sign of wound...and...)
daya sir ordered freedy to manage the body towards forensic lab.



scene 10: at the bureau
scene shifted to orange color shirt(guess...it's a freddy sir) who state to acp sir that the dead body which they recently found belongs to ramesh, general person and not a criminals. sachin sir and me went to missing person bureau and find out with in 2 days any report has been filed up of a person missing. yes, we find the home address from there. rajat sir and sachin sir is on the way to the address.he added"rajat sir has went to meet jailer who informed that these two criminals r given some days break as they behave nicely till they r in prison.a lawyer who bill them for some days is laywyer mahesh.
acp sir: oh ...oh... that's the matter. at first we found a dead body of a criminals and the second time too but when we find the body third time it's not a criminal but a general boy. "ye chakkar kya hey abhijeet". "Pata lagao ye ramesh hey kaha."...acp sir receive a call...( in call)nai me nahi attend kar paunga...
abhijeet sir : what happens sir?
acp sir : i was called for seminar and press conference...but i denied going there..
abhijeet sir : why sir? why did u denied? it's so important as it is the biggest seminar of the year...
acp sir: but what about the case?abhijeet...
abhijeet sir: we will see the case... we r here to solve is...i assure u that we will certainly solved the case...
acp sir: ok then i m leaving for the seminar...
abhijeet sir: u cannot go alone sir... if some one u have many arrested many culprit and there can't be enough security..then ...so plz take daya and freedy with u...
acp sir: ok abhijeet ok...i'll take them both.
abhijeet sir: freddy, go with acp sir,(abhijeet sir calling to daya sir to go with acp sir)...
(acp sir leave for the seminar)
acp sir: abhijeet, do convey me all the info about case ok.
abhijeet sir: sir...

scene 11: at daya sir's van
acp sir : daya, abhijeet doesn't listen to any one...i m not going for a seminar and he made me to go. it's ok but i can go alone but he asked me to take u and freedy.
daya sir: ya sir abhijeet is right. it's about the security of your's.
acp sir: u too daya...
freedy sir: aur nahi to kya sir. u r sooo important for us.


Edited by binod.abhijeet - 12 years ago
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Scene 12: at the bureau
rajat sir and sachin sir( towards bureau) delevering the info thet they had collected from the ramesh home.
rajat sir: sir, ramesh is alone at the house. his, padosi has file the case of missing him.
abhijeet sir: did u found any clue from his home.
sachin sir: no clue but just two mobile phone. on doing inquary about these two phones mobile company states that the contact took place between these two phones only.
rajat sir: but ya we found finger print which we have already sent to forensic lab for probating process.
abhijeet sir: that's good. bu till now we haven't fount the meaning of the code 656780 and 846582716984.
sachin do a job, find in the internet what could be the meaning of the code.

(salunke sir entering the bureau)
salunke sir: boss; this man is also killed by giving too much sleeping tablets.
abhijeet sir: aur kuch phata chala sir.
salunke sir: ya, i found a piece of paper which stale 11:30
abhijeet sir: what could be this 11:30
rajat sir: sir, it could be time 11:30 .
abhijeet sir: ur right rajat. it could be time. the criminal who is doing this all is very ruse. he is giving us evidences but non of them has become plenteous. When we find the meaning of the code: 656780 and 846582716984 we can be nearby to the criminals.

Scene 13: seminar and bureau mixed up:
at seminar:
acp sir, daya sir and freedy sir at the seminar. it?s 10:00in the morning.
acp sir is invited as a special guest and cid too. Seminar begins at 10:30.acp sir is on the gossip with various people and daya sir and freedy sir too.
at bureau:
sachin sir called to abhijeet sir near by computer.rajat sir comes too.
sachin sir: sir, I have found one meaning of these code. it could be ASCII(American standard code for information interchange)
rajat sir: then find out it's meaning sachin, found out.
abhijeet sir: do fast sachin.

(sachin sir convert these ASCII code in-to character which forms... "acp target" )
(65=a, 67=c..., similarly 84=t)
abhijeet sir: that means acp sir is in danger.(it's almost 11:20...jst 10 minute..)
(calling to daya sir...)
abhijeet sir: (to daya sir in phone) we have found the meaning of the code, it's acp target. so, now just 8 minutes left. do safe acp sir from there. we r also coming there.
daya sir: oh no...ok!
at seminar:
daya sir convey this info. to acp sir and told him to go out and be safe but acp sir denied to do so.At first acp sir ask daya sir to make all the people go out and be safe. Daya sir and freddy sir did it successfully to make all the people nicely safe but as a result of running outside acp sir get badly injured.

Scene 14: At hospital:
acp sir is admitted in a hospited.all the team including abhijeet sir, daya sir, freddy sir, rajat sir, sachin sir, dr.salunje,dr.tarika is around the acp sir.
Abhijeet sir:the entire reason for the acp sir's condition is me. If i have not stubbornly sent him for the conference and seminar the he wouldn't suffer like this.
Daya sir:no abhijeet, u r not the reason of this all.don't blame yourself.
Salunke sir: daya is right abhijeet.


(press has arrived in the hospital and started questioning the entire team about the condition)
press: abhijeet sir, what's the matter about this case. Till now three murder has taken place and one bomb blast where acp sir badly injured, what's the reason behind this? Why the culprit has not been arrested till now?
Abhijeet sir: we r doing our best to arrest the culprit.and u know that we r in critical condition as our acp sir is in the icu.
Press:is it reason that cid knowingly not arresting the culprit to save the acp sir as culprit is freely running.
Daya sir:what r u saying?how can u say such things to us?(daya sir become extrimly angry and going to crack the camera and hit the one of the press but abhijeet sir and salunke sir stop him)
abhijeet sir: plz let us to go.(abhijeet sir, daya sir, salunke sir,dr. Tarika goes from there and rajat sir, sachin sir and freddy sir contolling the crowd.)

who is the lawer mahesh? Won't acp be targeted again?will cid be able to solve the case? To know about this all please wait for the second part of the story.
Edited by binod.abhijeet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice promo ... All the best for story :) waiting and welcome to cid writers gang :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nsapo

will read soon😊

waiting for your's precious suggestions.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice story. Plz pm me frm next if possible.

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