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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: vermamegha
great gd very nice...
GDu r best...

Awww...😳

Thank You MEGHA...🤗

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: neeme
Nice story 😊

Thank You Boss...😳🤗

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Soni.

@Soni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#883

Oh GD you don't know how happy i am to read an Abhi centric story. Was desperately waiting for this masterpiece. This is seriously my most favorite story of yours. And I must say that no one would have written this specific story beautifully as much as you did. You did a complete justice with the characters and the emoticons attached and depicted with it. I loved and enjoyed everything that you wrote. Really liked the care of Daya for Abhi and the way he said 'mene pehle kabhi kisi ki care nahi ki haina; was really heart pinching. I could really fell for him, Liked both of doctors as well. There role was quite significant. The way Daya made Abhijeet do his exercise was really cute i could just about imagine Abhi's expressions and the treadmill scene was just about awesome. Its was really so beautiful. Thank you so much GD for such a exquisite piece of writing. I love you!!!!

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#884

Originally posted by: Soni.
Oh GD you don't know how happy i am to read an Abhi centric story. Was desperately waiting for this masterpiece. This is seriously my most favorite story of yours. And I must say that no one would have written this specific story beautifully as much as you did. You did a complete justice with the characters and the emoticons attached and depicted with it. I loved and enjoyed everything that you wrote. Really liked the care of Daya for Abhi and the way he said 'mene pehle kabhi kisi ki care nahi ki haina; was really heart pinching. I could really fell for him, Liked both of doctors as well. There role was quite significant. The way Daya made Abhijeet do his exercise was really cute i could just about imagine Abhi's expressions and the treadmill scene was just about awesome. Its was really so beautiful. Thank you so much GD for such a exquisite piece of writing. I love you!!!!

🤣 Shuker karo kal Kay EPI say Pehlay likh LI thi...😆😆

yaar, UR FB always raise My Blood Volume and mad me Speechless either somehow I m feeling that I read all these Lines earlier too...😉

Thanks a lot Yaar...😳

It's Difficult to write such type of story for ABHIJEET Sir (the Character) but I tried although totally UNSATISFACTORY Story for Me...

Thank You again...😳🤗

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pinky118

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Posted: 11 years ago

#885

Awesome story dada...👏

i like the way u expressed every emotion and care of DUO for each other...😉

Daya sir wearing shoper🤣

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#886

Originally posted by: pinky118
Awesome story dada...👏
i like the way u expressed every emotion and care of DUO for each other...😉
Daya sir wearing shoper🤣

Awww...😳😳

Thank You PINKO either I still cant Understand why U all like this Story...😕😕

TOPA tou pehna chuka tha, ab aur kya pehnata...😉😆😆

Thanks again...😳🤗

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SofiyaSam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#887

omg Dada, it's mind blowing. l am so happy after reading this one..my favourite now. I love it, you show both Buddy are so caring and what I say now. thank you so much for fulfill my wishes so fast. I m so happy with you.. God blessed you Dada. you are so so so sweet..love you..

waiting for your next story..All the best in advanced.

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Reshma

@Reshh16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#888

OK.. 1st sorry for commenting late.. Main kab ki padh chuki thi.. Lekin abhi abhi waqt mila..

I don't know what to say.. I mean I can't say if I liked it or didn't like it.. It was good... the usual duo love for each other.. But somehow felt something was missing.. The emotions.. Few emotions failed to penetrate me unlike the rest... Aisa mat sochna ki yeh ladki sirf do likhi hai, aur mijhe keh rahi hai n al.. But as an ardent reader, this is my personal opinion..

But the style of writing was very nice and the fever drama and the final scene abt Daya, Rahul FB thing was my favorite in that.. 😊

Plz feel free to PM me relatng this GD yaar..

Sorry if my comments hurt u

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#889

Originally posted by: .Nishi.
omg Dada, it's mind blowing. l am so happy after reading this one..my favourite now. I love it, you show both Buddy are so caring and what I say now. thank you so much for fulfill my wishes so fast. I m so happy with you.. God blessed you Dada. you are so so so sweet..love you..

waiting for your next story..All the best in advanced.

Yes Both Buddies are so Caring to each One...😳😳

arry Baccha, its Ur Love that U Like and Love this Story...😃😃

A Big Thank you to You NISHI ...😳🤗

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#890

Originally posted by: Reshma.
OK.. 1st sorry for commenting late.. Main kab ki padh chuki thi.. Lekin abhi abhi waqt mila..
I don't know what to say.. I mean I can't say if I liked it or didn't like it.. It was good... the usual duo love for each other.. But somehow felt something was missing.. The emotions.. Few emotions failed to penetrate me unlike the rest... Aisa mat sochna ki yeh ladki sirf do likhi hai, aur mijhe keh rahi hai n al.. But as an ardent reader, this is my personal opinion..

But the style of writing was very nice and the fever drama and the final scene abt Daya, Rahul FB thing was my favorite in that.. 😊

Plz feel free to PM me relatng this GD yaar..

Sorry if my comments hurt u

Honestly, its really a True Feedback as being a Writer I find it in that...👏👏

I really write it with little Uneasiness as ABHIJEET Sir as a Character Not in My mind like this...😉😉

He is always, Sharp, Strong, Sauve and doing Caring for Others...😳😳

little Introvert as well as in very few Scene I feels that He likes anyone Touch either we saw DAYA Sir very Rarely giving Him Support on Physical bases 😳😳(FW already showed it😉) either in DAYA Sir, U already saw that mostly ACP Sir and ABHI Sir touched Him, ACP Sir rubbing His Forehead, Creasing on His hairs, ABHI Sir Hugged Him, rubbing His arm, Clutched His palm... He Loves it...😳😳

So its really Difficult for Me too but I tried just for My Readers as Some loves and wanted this...😳😳

BTW, I have No Problem Beta...😳😳

Thank you so much for pointing some valed Mistakes... 😳🤗