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hey GD wow thank u so much for this... bas abi tori dair me parti hoon 👍🏼

Awesome work.Wonderful story👏⭐️
The dialogues are heart touching and sweet.👏
Hats off to you GD
All your stories are great.⭐️👏

Thanks a lot for the story.😃

Please keep writing GD.
God Bless you.🤗

Hey GD, just loved ur story... Its so beautiful ❤️
U very well depict abhi and daya emotions 👍🏼
I was looking for ur this type of story where daya is giving special care to abhijeet, bole toh sare nakhre uthaye ga 😉
And i really enjoyed reading ur dining/breakfast scene, desi and wadeshi nashta 😆 infact i really enjoyed reading from start to end 👏
Touch of humour, their teasing eachother and emotions depicted in ur stories i loved it
Thank u so much for ur beautiful story and thnx for pm as well... Stay blessed 😊

Oh I am extemely pleased to read this most requested story.. I was desperately waiting for it to be completed and published.. Believe me or not I read everything twice and will read it for the umteenth times more..this is seriously my most favorite story of yours. And I must say that no one would have written this specific story beautifully as much as you did. You did a complete justice with it.
i loved and enjoyed everything. And i really wanna thank you for writing this absolutely wonderful story which really was a tough task as it is a really different theme.. and you completely succeed in that. In the beginning it was a bit awkward to read it coz we all are habitual of reading Daya being the one of whom Abhijeet takes care but with the passage of time I get involved in your story and it all happened within some seconds.. I enjoyed everthing.. The fact that atlast Abhijeet left himself completely in the safe hands of Daya to be taken care of was really good to read.
Really liked the care of Daya and the way he said mene pehle kabhi kisi ki care nahi ki h na was really heart pinching... Liked both doctors as well.. The way Daya made Abhijeet do his exercise was really cute.. and that treadmill scene lol hahaha... loved that small scolding session of Daya.. as a whole i loved and enjoyed every scolding of Daya hmf.. accha hua daant diya badey bhai ko.. 😉
and enjoyed those breakfast and dinner parts as well..
Liked all the care Daya did.. And the care he took of the house..
Hmm liked this new shade of Daya you showed.. and ya I liked the title of this story as well.. 😊
Thank you so much Bhaijaan for the lovely story..
keep writing more and more... 🤗

Oh lovely story GD!!

Originally posted by: neha_dna

Read it GD...!!!

Beautifully written...!! 👏

Loved the interchanging...!

Very sweet dialogues... Both charactrs so nicely shown!! 👏

Have no more words to say how much I liked the story...!!

Keep writing GD...

God bless you 🤗

Aur tum Bhai mein khud ko dekhti ho... hai na?

Toh Bade Bhai se bhi kuchh seekho...

Aur apne darr ko conquer karo... Bhai jaise mut rehna... Kyun ki tumhaare saath Bade Bhai nahi rahenge humesha...!!

Take care 🤗

Originally posted by: duoa

Love u GD

Emotions are shown really nicely

Its happens sometimes if your caretaker falls ill u did not get how to look after and handle 😭

But the way you showed is really nice

I was waiting for this type of story from a quite long time happy to read it and hoping for more

Thank you

Originally posted by: beena.thomas

Awesome work.Wonderful story👏⭐️
The dialogues are heart touching and sweet.👏
Hats off to you GD ⭐️⭐️
All your stories are great.⭐️👏

Thanks a lot for the story.😃

Please keep writing GD.
God Bless you.🤗

Originally posted by: Veena..

Hey GD, just loved ur story... Its so beautiful ❤️
U very well depict abhi and daya emotions 👍🏼
I was looking for ur this type of story where daya is giving special care to abhijeet, bole toh sare nakhre uthaye ga 😉
And i really enjoyed reading ur dining/breakfast scene, desi and wadeshi nashta 😆 infact i really enjoyed reading from start to end 👏
Touch of humour, their teasing eachother and emotions depicted in ur stories i loved it
Thank u so much for ur beautiful story and thnx for pm as well... Stay blessed 😊