Originally posted by: DUOlover123
Oh I am extemely pleased to read this most requested story.. I was desperately waiting for it to be completed and published.. Believe me or not I read everything twice and will read it for the umteenth times more..this is seriously my most favorite story of yours. And I must say that no one would have written this specific story beautifully as much as you did. You did a complete justice with it.
Really I m 😲😲 after reading kay BHALOO, ko itni Bakwas Story Do Do baar parhni par rahi hay samjhny kay liyey...😆😆...
Yaar Thank You so much but I think so many Writers always did and will do much Justice with this Plot...👏👏
i loved and enjoyed everything. And i really wanna thank you for writing this absolutely wonderful story which really was a tough task as it is a really different theme.. and you completely succeed in that. In the beginning it was a bit awkward to read it coz we all are habitual of reading Daya being the one of whom Abhijeet takes care but with the passage of time I get involved in your story and it all happened within some seconds.. I enjoyed everthing.. The fact that atlast Abhijeet left himself completely in the safe hands of Daya to be taken care of was really good to read.
😆😆 Yes thats True even Mujhy Khud Likhtay huay samjh anhi aa raha tha kay Main kis pr Story likh raha hun, Baar baar Mujhy Characters kay Naam change karny par rahy thy...😉😉
haan jin logun ko Bara banny ka Shouq hota hay na wo kabhi Chotun pr Trust Nahi kr paatay... They feel Happy to be always BIG but I think Sometimes they give the Chance to Youngers atleast to gives them Lessons or as their Training part...😳😳
Really liked the care of Daya and the way he said mene pehle kabhi kisi ki care nahi ki h na was really heart pinching... Liked both doctors as well.. The way Daya made Abhijeet do his exercise was really cute.. and that treadmill scene lol hahaha... loved that small scolding session of Daya.. as a whole i loved and enjoyed every scolding of Daya hmf.. accha hua daant diya badey bhai ko.. 😉
haan wo Trademill wali Dant, I enjoyed... I made it in Realistic Way😉😉... I really Portray that Scene with My Feeling of Happiness...😆😆😆
and enjoyed those breakfast and dinner parts as well..
Liked all the care Daya did.. And the care he took of the house..
Hmm liked this new shade of Daya you showed.. and ya I liked the title of this story as well.. 😊
Thank you so much Bhaijaan for the lovely story..
Yes, I really Enjoyed that Title too... Little Different One...😉😈
keep writing more and more... 🤗
Kumkum Bhagya
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