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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: duoa

GD back with bang👏

Plot is mind blowing and the way u expressed all emotions is just beyond words to praise
loved this story and daya sir wearing topa 😆
hats of to u 👏👏
Dada kbhi bre bhai ko b nakhre uthwane ka moka do😊


awww, DUOA, I really Love UR Feedback...😳😳😳
its really gives Good Volume in Blood Level after Reading that Readers felt the Same as Writer itself...😉😳😳
hmm about Baray Bhai Nakhre, Sure I'll try but I think if U read My Earlier Uninvestigative Story titles TUJH SY NARAZ NAHI ZINDAGI where DAYA Sir Scared much with only the Fever of Baray Bhai so if Baray Bhai Nakhre uthany parein tou...😆😆
But Yes I'll Try in Future...👍🏼
Thank you so very much Baccha...😳🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kkkloveu

It was as fantastic as all your previous works, but this will be one of my favorites, it was simply decent , i don't have words to describe it...

The way you portray duo, the way you portray each and every emotion of them is simply awesome.
I loved the portrayal of relationships specially the TRIO...everything was fantastic
loved all the duo scenes, my personal favorite was that topi wala and that mobile snatching scene, you brought concept of DNA too..i liked it..
But there is something I find confusing is why Abhijeet took the decision in so much haste, i know you explained it but my small brain! may be the thing just bounced from over it...
Abhijeet's plan for taking DAYA there was showed nicely, it was a genuine plan that showed the mental chemistry between duo really well...
Will always be waiting for more from you...
AND yaar kabhi to Abhijeet sir ko bhi nakhre dikhana ka mauka diya karo..it will be nice to see daya making such a step and the consequences..will be waiting for a story based on Abhijeet sir's NAKHRE...


Honestly KKKLOVEU (Khatrun kay Kahilari Love U, hain na😆), its really a Big Honor for Me to have any Member FIRST POST as a Feedback on My any Creative Product...😳😳😳
So First a Big and Humble Thank You for this...😳👏👏
U find My product such Good which Inoculated U to make an Account in IF and gives Ur First Post on My Story, really a Big Achievement for GD...😳👏👏
Bulk of Praise, Applause, Likes, Loves really Boost the Happiness of Writer as well Raise the Blood Level😳😳, ohhh My Cheecks turned More and More Red😳😳.. OML.! I m turning Fat too...😆😆
About Ur Query, Yes its a Hasty Decision, so many points moving inside ABHIJEET Sir mind thatswhy He took that hasty Decision...😃😃
First, obviously the Blood Relation; U knew Blood Relation really matters...
Second, the Good Financial Background of DAYA Sir Father who tried to give Everything to His Son which cant be Affordable for ABHIJEET Sir as well DAYA Sir in Spacefic amount which they got as their Salaries...
Third, the Background of that Relation, its only Circumtances which Completely made a Big Gap in that Relation; its Not Done Delibrately by Both parties na...
Fouth, its any Parent Desire to Live with their Children either having so many Issues...
So, there are so many Points in His Mind but He missed a Big Point, Everything Based on Time and Age even Relations too, Ur Need and want Distinghuish between them with the passage of time...😊
there is always a Replacement Theory in Life...😊
After Birth, U need Ur Parents, then with Ur brought up its little Backup with Siblings, Friends, Studies, Jobs, Marraiges, Kids etc; It does not mean that U does not Need Ur parents but its a Heirachy Tree cz Ur base is UR parents...😳😳😳
I am again Very Obliged to UR Lovely Feedback 😳😳😳and Yes trying to Write Something on ABHIJEET Sir Nakhre in Future...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Bhaijaan this story was simply adorable... Ya adorable.. this is my most favourite story out of all your stories... i am in love with the plot itself. A really unique one and the portrayal of the relationship and understanding between all the characters is too amazing to be described in words. Loved each and every part of it.. It is a perfect uninvestigative story... liked how Badey bhai was guilty after doing all that.. and loved the way ACP sir got the fact that Badey bhai is guilty and is now in pain. I totally admire the character of the father you showed here.. i mean i respect the descision he took and left his son in the safe hands. After meeting him after like decades he was unable to even touch him to the fullest.. he doesn't even talked with him except getting harsh and rude words... you showed him perfectly.. And that line which Daya sir said twice Nakul wali.. wow that left me in tears.. You did a fine job in every thing bhaijaan.
keep on rocking... God bless you and yaaa waiting for more stories from your side..🤗


Awww, BHALOO is here...😉
Yes, its One of My Fav Stories too...😳😳
The Idea coming in a Click and I wrote it in One Night...😆
I m trying to give Some New Idea as I think Now He is Settled in His Life in such a way that Any Upcoming or Past Ride Create Difficulties for Him...😳😳
About DAYA Sir Father, Yaar I really Pitty on that Man and I Portrayed him Maturely cz He also Understand His Son Mental Approach, His Son is Not a Teenager, He is a Mature man having His Own Decisions and Standard of Life from His Birth either after Meeting Him, He realized that His Son is in Good hands from His Birth till Now and its really a Big Gift for any parent...😳😳
Still I really Enjoyed His Love, Emotions, Concern for His Son which His Son always Splashed with His Anger and Rudeness...
Somehow His More rational attiturde only because of Baray Bhai Immediate hasty Decision...😉😉
But DAYA Sir knew He cant gives that ABHI PLACE to anyone in His Heart, Mind, Soul and Life...😳🤗
A Big Thank You to BHALOO for such Lovely and Big Review...🤗
ohhh POPAT turning More and More Red and Fat too...😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice story!👍🏼 I am feeling bad for Mr. Shetty. but Daya's reaction was also natural. 😔 anyway, glad to see u back!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely ⭐️ and Outstanding story GD... ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
It is a perfect uninvestigative story .. ⭐️ mind blowing plot and emotions ke bare mein kya kahu...
story tooo emotional atyachar se full hai.. ⭐️
I Loved each and every part of it... ⭐️
⭐️ or Abhi sir jagat Daya sir ki life main koi nahi le sakta ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ koi nahi ⭐️ ⭐️
or kuch kahane ki jarurt nahi kisi ne meri baat already kah di or mujhe jawab bhii mil gaya... ⭐️
so I am waiting for next story... 👍🏼
👏 👏 👏

and thank you so much for coming back soon... 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
dada once again grt stry smwhat similar plot is there on ff its nt yet cmpltd
jo v ho aap hamesha se rock karte ho
aur nw once again wlcme bck with bang
aur daya sir apne jagah bilkul sahi the ma baap ka daulat nahi unki jarurat hoti hey bachoko
bachpan ka har hasi har khawish har takleef ko share karne ke liye
jo tab nahi ate unhe kabhi ane ka hak nahi hey na apne bacho ki saath pane ka
unhone saath nahi diya to unhe koi kiu dey?


jo v ho vaiya a big round of applouse👏

ak req karu?actually ak plot hey par mjhe likhna nahi ata...aap likhenge plsss us plot per?

agar abhi sir ki yaaddash bapas ajay aur unki pichle jindegi se jurne kiliye unhe apne bhai jaise dost se dur jana pare to?agar unhe firse ohi senior-junior rltn mein bapas ana pare to???

vaiya iss theme par kuch likhie na pls😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
NO GD my name surely is not based on khitron ke khiladi, AND in KD style would you like to take the case of my name😉
HMM...let me see i will give you big big reviews on all your stories if you are by any chance able to find my name..i think that's the biggest achievement for a writer...
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Posted: 11 years ago
New story!!
Story se pehle reviews padh liye mene iss baar 😆 Aur lagta hai tumne mere Abhi ko wapas bura bana diya.

Popat, wait till i read this story agar achi nahi lagi toh iss bar saza milegi. I haven't forgotten DNA yet 😉 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kkkloveu

NO GD my name surely is not based on khitron ke khiladi, AND in KD style would you like to take the case of my name😉

HMM...let me see i will give you big big reviews on all your stories if you are by any chance able to find my name..i think that's the biggest achievement for a writer...



😲😲😲
Matlab U already Commented on My All Stories...😕😕😕
RAAZ KHUFYA COMMENTER ka...😉😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: snehal.

New story!!

Story se pehle reviews padh liye mene iss baar 😆 Aur lagta hai tumne mere Abhi ko wapas bura bana diya.

Popat, wait till i read this story agar achi nahi lagi toh iss bar saza milegi. I haven't forgotten DNA yet 😉 😈


🤣 I love this SNEHAL...
Sounds Thehr POpat abhi Teri Khaber leti hun...🤣

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