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Originally posted by: gadhadada

🤣 I love this SNEHAL...

Sounds Thehr POpat abhi Teri Khaber leti hun...🤣

Originally posted by: snehal.

Haan haan Ther abhi nahi story padhne ke baad matlab monday ke baad teri khabar leti hun 😉

Originally posted by: shreela

nice story!👍🏼 I am feeling bad for Mr. Shetty. but Daya's reaction was also natural. 😔 anyway, glad to see u back!😃

Originally posted by: misha.as

Lovely ⭐️ and Outstanding story GD... ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
It is a perfect uninvestigative story .. ⭐️ mind blowing plot and emotions ke bare mein kya kahu...
story tooo emotional atyachar se full hai.. ⭐️
I Loved each and every part of it... ⭐️
⭐️ or Abhi sir jagat Daya sir ki life main koi nahi le sakta ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ koi nahi ⭐️ ⭐️
or kuch kahane ki jarurt nahi kisi ne meri baat already kah di or mujhe jawab bhii mil gaya... ⭐️
so I am waiting for next story... 👍🏼
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and thank you so much for coming back soon... 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

dada once again grt stry smwhat similar plot is there on ff its nt yet cmpltd

jo v ho aap hamesha se rock karte ho

aur nw once again wlcme bck with bang

aur daya sir apne jagah bilkul sahi the ma baap ka daulat nahi unki jarurat hoti hey bachoko

bachpan ka har hasi har khawish har takleef ko share karne ke liye

jo tab nahi ate unhe kabhi ane ka hak nahi hey na apne bacho ki saath pane ka

unhone saath nahi diya to unhe koi kiu dey?

jo v ho vaiya a big round of applouse👏

ak req karu?actually ak plot hey par mjhe likhna nahi ata...aap likhenge plsss us plot per?

agar abhi sir ki yaaddash bapas ajay aur unki pichle jindegi se jurne kiliye unhe apne bhai jaise dost se dur jana pare to?agar unhe firse ohi senior-junior rltn mein bapas ana pare to???

vaiya iss theme par kuch likhie na pls😊

Originally posted by: Reshma.

GD yaar... Finally finished reading it.. 😃

Great job really!! A well handled story... Neither too emotional, nor too stiff..👏 But the Nakul wala dialogue had some effect on me. The best the about ur stories are the portrayal of emotions which was just too perfect.. Mr. Shetty's character is worth appreciating. 👏👏 Loved th emway you showed Abhijeet sir guilty and hurt after the incident..👏

Thank u GD.. God bless ya.. Keep writing 😃

Originally posted by: .Nishi.

Omg Dada, what is this. uff how can Abhi sir do this, ye galat hai. Daya sir bachhe thore hi hai. Anyway wo at last sab theek ho gaya. Abhi sir deserve a big punishment for this all. It's a very emotional story Dada. I love it..

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I have request Dada, plss kabhi Daya sir ki jo jagah aapke story mein hoti hai wo jagah kabhi Abhijeet Sir ko bhi de do plsss. I am waiting for such types of story by you..