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Originally posted by: .Nishi.

Amazing story Dada.
will be back soon plss.

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

My pleasure Dada that you take it as a compliment😳🤗..
I will wait till your comeback even if necessary two years or more.. Don't leave hope. Hope is the thing which drive the life force on Earth.. I have faith on you🤗🤗🤗...
Yes Snehal di deserves a big round of applause👏👏👏..

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Thank You so much MRF either I thought wen I first commented on Ur First Story at FF...😲

U reffered Me the Writer of IF...😕😕

toou kya pehlay Tum nay Meri koi Story Nhai parhi...😲😲

Shame on U Baccha...😉😆😆

Thank you so much Baccha...😳😳

Yes, its Painful to Portraying any Original Incident wrapped in Fiction form...😭

Hahaha no GD, I read many of your stories and I gave you one name on PM na... 😊

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Yes and I m losing it more Fast than Time...😭😭😭

I will never lose my hope and faith on you.. You have to comeback Dada and I know you will be successful 🤗🤗🤗..

First of all, so sorry for replying so late... 😳

First of all I am very very sorry GD..main feedback dena hl bhool gayi. 😭 😭
A big Sorry for my big mistake




about the story GD, main kya bolu...😛 Amazing and Masterpiece ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
I loved it.. APC sir and Daya Sir Care's for Abhi sir was super.. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ and unke friendship ki suruaat se lelkar story ke last tak ki kahani to bilkul hi nilali hai.. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ or investigation ko kaise bhool sakte hai, mind blowing ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Aapko to FW ka writer hona chahiye tha 😛


I m always waiting for ur story par ab aap break le rahi ho..ok...will come back soon with fresh mind and all you want...me waiting for you 😉

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for you ... 😊

Originally posted by: neha_dna

First of all, so sorry for replying so late... 😳

Hope you are not angry...

Finally read the story "Red Signal"...

Loved it GD... it is awesome as usual!!! 👏 And loved the plot very much SNEHAL 👏

Great job by both of you!!! 😃

ACP and Daya's care for Abhijeet is shown so nicely...

Loved the way you built the bond of Friendship between the Duo!!

I could feel Daya's feelings when Abhi said that Daya broke the code... I was so touched...!

The investigation was nice too!! 👏

Great effort by both of you!!! Hope to see many more creations from this JODI!!! 😃👏⭐️

And about you taking a break GD, take rest from his till you feel refreshed again to write new story... 😊

Hope this break is a short one 😉

Will always look forward to the next story from you 😊

Till then, enjoy your break!!! 😉

Originally posted by: saman0

Sorry GD for replying too late. I just read it last night but couldn't reply😳

Truely, you are a brilliant writer👏⭐️

You can beat those OTT masters...😃😆

Not boosting; This was a remarkable one👏

Awesome tie-up shown between duo😳

Investigation was zero cool👍🏼

Originally posted by: misha.as

First of all I am very very sorry GD..main feedback dena hl bhool gayi. 😭 😭
A big Sorry for my big mistake




about the story GD, main kya bolu...😛 Amazing and Masterpiece ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
I loved it.. APC sir and Daya Sir Care's for Abhi sir was super.. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ and unke friendship ki suruaat se lelkar story ke last tak ki kahani to bilkul hi nilali hai.. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ or investigation ko kaise bhool sakte hai, mind blowing ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Aapko to FW ka writer hona chahiye tha 😛


I m always waiting for ur story par ab aap break le rahi ho..ok...will come back soon with fresh mind and all you want...me waiting for you 😉

🤗 🤗 🤗

🤗 🤗

🤗

for you ... 😊