Hr Zulm...!(New Experimental VM @PG 139) - Page 44

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

very nice stories u hv wrt.

plz add me ur pm list if u like.

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Hmm..what to say and what not 😆. Same adjectives again and again to praise your work.. I am not at all shocked at Daya sir's behaviour towards Abhi sir, Acp sir and teammates 😈.. But killing a little kid 😲 😲 😲..was the most shocking event.. How could Daya sir do this ? I am totally confused at this point 😕 😕.. Yes, so many questions are raising in mind 😉 .. Hope we will get the answers soon 😉 😉.. This time you didn't make Daya sir a kharoos Saas 😛 but a merciless, heartless criminal 😈 😈 😈.. Its really nice to see the bond between Freddy sir and Daya sir 👏 which is absent now in Cid .. Acp sir's mental struggle, pain of a father is really hearttouching ⭐️ ⭐️.. Feeling so bad for Abhi sir❤️ ❤️ ..he has turned into living dead.. Just wish we get him back in his cop avatar so that he could dig out the whole matter 😎 ... Loved how Rahul gave him mental support ⭐️ ⭐️.. But I didn't get the point why HQ sealed duo residence 😕.. Oh forgot to mention about Tony..well this guy really cracks me up 🤣.. The last videocall of Daya sir and his tone.. Seems some more shock is coming for Cid team 😉 😈.. Looking forward to read the conditions of team members badly 😈 😈 😈.

Originally posted by: Forfriend

ufff Sahi kaha tha PM me aapne Its grilling...

so Dare devil brain is working on high pinch... excellent... will not say love it... as I want see Daya in dare devil look but not the way he talk with ACP sir and Abhi...

hmmm come to story feel its necessary that rashness of Daya as still ACP Abhijeet salunkhe are not believing internally that Daya can be so rash...

If he behave in silent mode or some thing they will never believe... some how i feel some thing more than just a plan behind all this...

and As with the team I also believe that Daya is doing all this due to some proper reason... due to following three points

1. the reason he choose... that he want to become ACP... no not yet all convincing

2. He did not hit Abhijeet just raise hand

3. He was there at meeting point bit early... also meeting point is chosen by him...

I like Tony here... Rahul too

Now I am eager to see Abhijeet in his angry young man and sharp shine look... As its will be awesome too see Abhijeet in his full form standing against Daya who is turn total Dare Devil...

amazing concept... well written... and smooth phasing...

waiting for next one... you created a new atmosphere arround... rather than showing same teary DUO story (I think you got what i want to say... the same we discus many times)...

BH... Hats of to you for writing such a different Daya ... 🤗

Neeme hats of to you too for such a different theme... 👏

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Me to review dene hi nahi wala tha... 😡 But phir is second part ko bhi thoda pur ronaq banana tha na is liye aa gaya...😆
To be honest I am loving this new Daya but not to this much extent that he is speaking rubbish against his own team...
The fact that Daya wants to become an ACP is not quite satisfying to me..
I too think that there must be some strong reason behind such an outburst...
Yeah I was shocked too on Daya raising his hand on Abhijeet.. though it didn't hit him but haven't expected this..
Daya killing a girl...😲
I was seriously like this the moment I read that.. how come he kill a small kid..
Daya is shown really different in this story.. really different.. I am loving this change but this rude behaviour of Daya is hurting me as well.. I mean it is going too far..
And ya.. one thing more..
The CCTV footage must also have captured the person who dumped the weapon in the dustbin.. hena.. I mean when Daya was talking on the phone and when that criminal [Naam bhool gaya me..😆 ] asked his people to put the pistol inside the garbage then that must also be captured in the video.. so I think that person must have been viewed by the team.. isn't it..
Aaannd after a long time I loved Rahul in your story..😉
The chapter desrves a big applause and you deserve a big dhappi on your back... 😆 and Neeme di deservers a big applause for her theme.. 😊
I loved the whole presentation of the story...
Now coming to my point... Please upload soonn..

Originally posted by: snehal.

Exactly.. I am waiting for the same.. I am feeling like Daya sir ko devil toh bana diya but in GD's words the "CID bahu" post is now in hands of abhijeet 😛

Well.. I do remember my dhamki GD 😈 but couldn't stop myself after reading this 😉

Hmm. What he said to ACP sir very unexpected, to Abhi - very much expected. Need to hurt him more to get away from him.. But killing the small girl? That was too much. But i am still confused was it only a video or police did get the body of kid? Cause if its really just a video then obviously its a part of bigger plan or this isn't a real Daya. 😕

Chalo next part ka aur jo forfriend ne kaha hai uska intezaar rahega😉

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya

GD that was too good! I was going to post a long review, lekin woh jab pura ho jayega. 😉

Originally posted by: pinky118

OMG!!!

I can't believe Daya sir can kill a sweet little girl😲.. Daya sir can change as much..ohh.

I m speechless...the story was superb..👍🏼

Originally posted by: .Nishi.

OMG😲😲😲
Daya sir can change as much.😲 so shocking😲. Anyways The story was superb..⭐️⭐️⭐️
thanks neeme⭐️ and dada ⭐️, waiting 4 next part.

Originally posted by: duoa

😲

daya sir ke dimagh main chal kia raha hai?

really curious to know the reason behind all this hungama

suspence wahin ka wahin khara hai 😭

jaldi jaldi post karo

Originally posted by: Sonali.

GD how many more parts? Mera enthu baadh raha hai... Though I am yet to read 2nd part