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Originally posted by: kkkloveu
Chalo dada i am back with new colour and font...😆
Nice Change...😉😆Hmmm mera toh sar hi ghum gaya dada...bhala aisa koi karta hai kya..😡...choti si bachi ko 12 ki science isse jyada samajh aane lagi thi...😆Ek toh yeh net...😡... beech beech mein se pictures hi gayab ho gayin...par phir bhi maine bahot khoon paseena bahakar aapki yeh story padh hi li...😳apna hee Khoon Paseena bahaya na ya kisi aur ki Shamat lay aayii...😉😆😆The starting was very good, though i felt that there was a problem in flow of the story from first part last scene to this part first scene but since you wrote it in parts so this was bound to happen...hmmm, might be I cant Balance My Flow as I wrote two three Era's simultaneously..... moving Past, Present and Past Perfect as well...😆😆😆Abhijeet sir's and Acp sir's Convo was very good, i loved abhijeet sir's answer to acp sir...👏.. though i felt it was a bit disrespectful from his part, but mujhe yeh kehne ka hak nahi...arry aap nay kyun aisa socha😭😭... BTW, could U plz clear this DISRESPECTFUL way, so its Good for Me to Improvise myself and Clear Ur Doubt as well...😊Acp sir trying to grab mistakes from abhijeet's part was well portrayed...👏baaki toh beech mein main ghum hi gayi thi...mujhe toh bas yeh samajh aaya ki sabh ne milke dates nikalli un pics se, woh dates daya sir ki life se related thin...jisse yeh case thoda aage badh gaya...😆 haan for understanding that U must knew every aspect of Both those Cases...😉😉😉You showed sharp shine mind working in those circumstances too, i really liked that abhijeet sir observing the speedometer and through it taking the team to the spot, a brilliant piece of outdoor investigation you showed here dada, thank you for this...I m trying and Like that u Loved it...😳🤗Then salunkhe sir investigating with the team and yes his expression when Acp sir asked salunkhe to check daya sir too was very nice...👏😉😆Then that whole house searching scene, abhijeet sir's intentions while asking daya to open the door, taking daya in and out of the room, asking salunkhe to pick fingerprints was good...Acp sir giving chance to his sharp shine in that situation was very well expressed and shown.Thank You Baccha...😳😳😳Abh main shayad isske baad phirse bhatak gayi kyunki mujhe kuch itna yaad nahi...🤣I remember daya sir recounting that they still had sonali's fingerprints in their records and some scene where abhijeet sir tells that he is going to get phansi and something like that...yes yes...😆😆😆Then passport scene and team caught sonali through it...sorry sorry dada thoda mixed ho gaya na...😳..but abh sabh kuch itna confusing tha toh main kya karun...its ok Baccha...😃😃Now sonali's confession scene was very very good, that dialogue of her about daya changing his dressing style and his facial style his hair cut was very good...👏again Thank You...😳😳That dialogue of abhijeet sir when they trying to grab sonali in thier hands and salunkhe getting irritated was nicely portrayed..."sir methanal"..🤣Dada lekin abhijeet sir ne izzat toh rakh hi li na, banda toh methanal se bhi mar hi jata hai...😆The last duo scene and all their convo's in between were fantastic..⭐️This experiment of yours was very good dada...Big Thank You...😳😳Lekin dada ki true identity ko maine miss kiya issmein..bahot jyada...will, be waiting for next dada, a dada's style story...😉Beta I m Happy What I did, Experiment should be Different Na...😉😉😉aur haan dada maine puri padh li..😉WOW... Hats Off...👏👏
Thank You so much...😳🤗
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