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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nsapo

P.S: This poem is highly senti and was to say inspired from my somebody around me's house


The Beginning , or the end?
Im sure he remembers the time
When a good news was delivered ,
When God gave a tiny little princess,as a true blessing
The time when we heard her giggle and speak
A language of her own,of innocence
When he taught her to stand on her own feet
And walked miles , in all joy and sadness
Or when the times they fought , and then reconciled
Maybe the time when he gave her over to someone

Of course he will reminiscence the birth
Of two miniatures of joy, grandchildren
Somewhere,latent,a tiny glitch,a misunderstanding
And then a fight too big, and the daughter so grown up
That she forgot to bend, to submit
She stood strong and wrong,and somehow it all changed
To the hands which gave her food and all she needed,
She delivered a notice,to leave and not interfere
Left him out in the freezing cold, to fend,forgotten
And then was a silence , a very long one...

It is true every man has his own mistakes
Sometimes too grave,but what good is a body
Without a warm, beating heart?I know he did
Feel a sharp pain, too sharp to even let tears fall
Like a Lightning, quick and torturous,But to where
Could he turn to ? He had no home...
He comes once in a while,as a stranger
To the place built up on his efforts
They dont remember him fondly
Time a cruel thing,age crueller
Binding Shackles to their creator,
What examples have they set for their children?
But to follow them forever?


Quite tendering...😃
Amazing work Apoorva👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
the beginning or the end
a very heart touching poem appu
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nsapo

Thanks Ranju😳 ...but its a song😛


when i started commenting poem came to my mind as i am used to that😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Amazing Apoorva di⭐️⭐️.. A very tragic, painful and shameful fact of our society..
HNY to you again🤗..


Thanks Angel😳..I wanted people to understand thatThats why posted...
Happy New Year to you too😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Reshma.

A very touching poem Apoorva..😊

I second Shreya.. I choose to call it a beginning 😊


Thanks Reshma😳 Ya sure😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Reshma.

Read your other poem apo.. GOD OF ACTING AND QUEEN OF BLANKNESS..😊

just too good.. felt like u wrote my heart out especially the last part...😊

Amazing da 🤗


Thanks Again Reshma😳😛😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks Swagatam😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sheroo9000

Very Nice Apoorva👏

Happy New Year😃


Thanks Sheroo😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks Saman And Ranju Also😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love Cid song is fabulous...👏👏👏
I loved the way how you subjected each officer in rhythmic manner😃


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