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-SNEHAL-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

You wrote exactly my mind!

Excellent poem apoorva! Keep it up 👏 👍🏼

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: snehal.
You wrote exactly my mind!
Excellent poem apoorva! Keep it up 👏 👍🏼

Thank you Snehal😉

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

🤣 I cracked up in laughter.. Poetic WU di😛..
But di apne toh iss bar God ke jagah Prince use kia hai😛..
I understand your point about posting on FB.. I am not saying about any actors..just to convey our disappointment and grief to FW officials😛

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
🤣 I cracked up in laughter.. Poetic WU di😛..
But di apne toh iss bar God ke jagah Prince use kia hai😛..
I understand your point about posting on FB.. I am not saying about any actors..just to convey our disappointment and grief to FW officials😛

Thanks angel😳😃 the actors will also see na but😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Yes yesterday's episode was so logical that everyone couldn't help but give it a 1. 😆

Other than that so poetic! You truly conveyed our feelings to them. 😆

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya
Yes yesterday's episode was so logical that everyone couldn't help but give it a 1. 😆

Other than that so poetic! You truly conveyed our feelings to them. 😆

Thank you😳😆

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: .Nishi.
lovely dear.

Thanks Nishi😳😃

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

As the year ends Id like to thanks all of you for being such great critics and friends and made my thread better 😃😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#349

New Year so starting on a New Page😛

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#350

P.S: This poem is highly senti and was to say inspired from my somebody around me's house

The Beginning , or the end?

Im sure he remembers the time

When a good news was delivered ,

When God gave a tiny little princess,as a true blessing

The time when we heard her giggle and speak

A language of her own,of innocence

When he taught her to stand on her own feet

And walked miles , in all joy and sadness

Or when the times they fought , and then reconciled

Maybe the time when he gave her over to someone

Of course he will reminiscence the birth

Of two miniatures of joy, grandchildren

Somewhere,latent,a tiny glitch,a misunderstanding

And then a fight too big, and the daughter so grown up

That she forgot to bend, to submit

She stood strong and wrong,and somehow it all changed

To the hands which gave her food and all she needed,

She delivered a notice,to leave and not interfere

Left him out in the freezing cold, to fend,forgotten

And then was a silence , a very long one...

It is true every man has his own mistakes

Sometimes too grave,but what good is a body

Without a warm, beating heart?I know he did

Feel a sharp pain, too sharp to even let tears fall

Like a Lightning, quick and torturous,But to where

Could he turn to ? He had no home...

He comes once in a while,as a stranger

To the place built up on his efforts

They dont remember him fondly

Time a cruel thing,age crueller

Binding Shackles to their creator,

What examples have they set for their children?

But to follow them forever?

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