WU- Rishikesh Mein Aparadh -III(2nd June)

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Rishikesh mein Aparadh- III


Scene 1
ACP , Dr.Salunkhe and Purvi at a hospital. Jyoti , a newly married lady who died due to the drugs Packets stored in her stomach post surgery, is lying on a stretcher.ACP vows to avenge her death and regrets the fact that they could not provide help in time to rescue her. Purvi suggests that they might be using innocent girls to smuggle drugs. Salunkhe reminds him that the killer has a tattoo on his hand and ACP vows that once they get hold of the artist who made the tattoo, there is nothing in the world that can save the killer from his clutches.

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At the tattoo parlour -ACP with Inspector Pavan
The artist agrees to ACP that it takes a lot of tolerance and endurance to get a tattoo in that part of the hand and on prodding he says he remembers a newly wed couple come to the tattoo parlour and the husband got a tattoo done.They show the photo of Jyoti and ask if it was her and he vehemently refuses. ACP insists that since he is such a fine artist as the pictures suggest his proficiency, he would like him to make a sketch of the couple for CID. The artist willingly obliges.
Scene- 3
Vineet and Nikhil enter in a local colourful auto and approach the nearest flower seller .They ask him if he has seen a man holding a black bag standing anywhere close by.He replies that he cant say for sure , but if they show him a photograph , he might be able to help them.Vineet asks Nikhil to show the sketch that ACP sir sent them. On seeing the photo, the man shows clear signs of recognition and says he doesn't know him but has seen him near Triveni Ghat a few times.He directs them to Triveni Ghat.

Scene-4
At unknown location
Typical entertaining sequence by FW. Dhenchu walking around suspiciously ,Pankaj following not so discreetly and DCP Chitroley behind Pankaj. They traverse through a tedious crowd and many staircases. Pause.

Scene-5
At Triveni ghat
Daya , Purvi , Vineet and Nikhil reach triveni ghat and pray to a beautiful statue of Shiva and disperse to continue their search.

Scene -6
Resume comedy.Pankaj follows dhenchu and hides behind a staircase while Dhenchu looks around searchingly.DCP comes and calls Pankaj and he avoids him thinking he's a stranger😆.On the grand realisation , pankaj and Dhenchu starts running around in circles🤢. DCP asks him why Dhenchu is avoiding him and asks if hes found the man he asked to search for. Pankaj says that he was following them as per ACP's orders.DCP grumbles about how ACP manages to interfere in all his matters and strictly warns Pankaj not to divulge the fact that he met DCP and Dhenchu and Pankaj does a "main kaun hoon? "act.😕

Scene- 7
Back at Triveni Ghat
Everyones positioned in various parts of Triveni Ghat waiting for the man.Then a couple come arm in arm showing full signs of newly weddedness. They go to a nearby flower stall to buy garlands and Nikhil spots them.When he reports to Daya, he asks Nikhil to make sure they stay put.He gives them a killer look and the man starts running.And the chase begins and Purvi seizes the wife.They lose track of him. The wife wants to know why they are searching for her husband Yogesh and Daya replies that he is a drug smuggler who marries girls and kills them after sewing in drugs inside them. She starts wailing and Daya stops her and asks whether she met Yogesh there. She replies in the affirmative and says that they were supposed to return to Mumbai the next day.She says that they had stayed at Rajpratap hotel in Room no. 105.(trust me when i say this that lady was bad at acting. Her crying looked like fainting and her expressions were soo fake)🤣

Scene 8
At Rajpratap hotel
Daya , Purvi , Pankaj and Inspector Pavan arrive at the hotel .They ask the manager to show and ope room no. 105 immediately.The manager looks questioningly and Daya threatens to break the room door. In the vicinity , Yogesh is there and hears and starts running and attracts attention(such a fool😆). The cahse him through the hotel and Yogesh jumps over the gate and rides a conveniently placed cycle.The CID team follows and finds three cycles( so convenient.Talk about pre - planning😆)which the men take and Purvi starts running with them.After sometime , Yogesh falls of his cycle and when almost Day areches to him he is shot.Daya ,Pankaj and Pavan follow the shooter while purvi checks for Yogesh's pulse.After a long search , they get hold him and Daya half strangles him on the edge of a terrace and the killer says that he was paid to do this and Daya reprimands him that he has no morals. The killer replies that the person is found on Foriegner Beach.😕 He asks for the guys name and I dint catch a word of what he said.😕😕

Scene9
At the Beach- ACP , Abhijeet 👏( nice look both of them), Pankaj and Dr. Salunkhe lying in wait and the killer in open waiting for the guy who paid him to kill Yogesh. A man arrives in the motorboat and circles the area to make sure they are not seen.Abhijeet and ACP get anxious that he spotted them and will leave.( The part of Abhijeet getting shocked and saying woh aa gaya was too real😆) Ultimately , after a thorough inpection , the man lands on the shore.He goes to the killer and tells him that everyone in the city saw him running and did the CID get him? The killer agrees and asks him to save him and the man says that you were the one who shot and now you have to repent.The killer threatens the man that he'll report him to cid and the man is about to shoot him when Abhijeet intervenes skilfully and the boat leaves him on shore and leaves.The man is caught after sime time by Abhijeet who slaps him and the man starts wailing and the man confesses to getting the girls married to Yogesh repeatedly as they did not suspect anything.ACP is wild with rage( nice intense acting in between the comedy)👏 that they killed so many innocent girls to fulfill their dirty deeds.He goes out of control and is about to shoot the man when Abhijeet stops him.

Scene ' 10
ACP meets Dhenchu in an unknown location and Dhenchu is surprised that ACP forgave him so soon inspite of his working for DCP . ACP gives a laugh and says that he has nothing against him and Dhenchu says ACP is such a nice person and the DCP had poisoned his mind against ACP.Dhenchu says that DCP told him that ACP should never be trusted and is like a snake and a chameleon and promises to report whatever DCP says about ACP to him.ACP acts impressed and gifts him a spy pen and asks DHEnchu to safely keep it in his pocket and never remove it.😆(really ? ACP forgave dhenchu??😆)

Scene ' 11
DCP spots Dhenchu in a streetside shop trying on some goggles and asks him to follow.DCP and Dhenchu reach the middle of Ganga in a boat as he wants to tell Dhenchu something confidentially.DCP confides that even the boatsman are his confidantes.DCP asks Dhenchu if he has traced down the man he asked for.Dhenchu says that he lives in Haridwar. DCP asks him what he told ACP and DHenchu replies that he kept his mouth shut.He suggests why he doesn't take help of his CID to trace down the man.DCP says that he doesn't want to trace him but wants to kill him and also three other people.Dhenchu asks him to leave him out of this and not involve him in a murder and DCP threatens him. ACP hears this through the secret microphone and is shocked and takes a decision to follow DCP and Dhenchu to Haridwar.

Scene-12
Nikhil And ACP arrive in Haridwar at Har Ki Bawdi and ACP says with him about , he will not allow DCP to kill anyone.Nikhil asks him if he's sure of this place and ACP says that the information he received says so.He spots DCP and says that even Dhenchu must be hear because the microphone is crackling and says that he will punish him rightly for his oversmartness. And the finally spot DCP and Dhenchu in the crowd and wonder where thay are going.
Dhenchu brings with him a spy who claims to know the man's location and DCP asks Dhenchu if anyone knows that they are here and Dhenchu replies in the negative and says that they cant even trace him through his phone as his phone is switched off.DCP asks the man to lead him to the man's house form a distance to avoid suspicion.
Nikhil is scared that the DCP will punish him and ACP tells him to stop being a coward and respect CID when he's with him.
Dhenchu leads DCP to that man's home and DCP loads his gun in front of many people who get scared and Dhenchu reassures them that DCP is a ration officer. Dhenchu runs away and when he sees ACP and Nikhil approaching in the opposite direction he disappears from below the crowd.The crowd directs ACP to room no 13 where DCP went and as they are searching for Dhenchu , they hear a gunshot form above. The search the room and find no one about. Nikhil says DCP has disappeared and ACP slams it down as nonsense. They search under bed, behind curtains and all that and finally check the bathroom . ACP asks DCP to come out and Nikhil trembles and asks him to leave the DCP alone. After the timeout , ACP opens the door to find a dead man inside.


Sorry for the Late posting.All thanks to my beautiful laptop.😆

Edited by nsapo - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is my first time...So please forgive me for my mistakes and help me improve by giving me feedback.😃I had a lot of comments to add but then no time,😆
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Thanks for the WU...I was waiting for this one...I thought this might help me make some sense of last night's epi...but...😆
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Congrats on your first WU, Apoorva. Well-written! 👏
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nice update apoorva.. it looks nice while reading than it was shown in episode 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for wu and you have nicely written it
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thanks ravi , vis di , snehal , rukhsar and rishabh😳
vis di...what to do?i never understood it either😆
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Congrats on your debut as Written Updater!! 😊
Lovely WU and the comments were also nice...👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats Apoorva for ur debut WU 👏
And thanx for the lovely update 👏
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thanx reshma and deba di😛

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