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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: neerkhan88

its fabulous 👏

really gud and yup i am relaxed a bit after reading this story hope now my history papers goes well😊


hahaha i am sure it will di
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gadhadada


Baccha do it...😊
Claps or Critisize tou Parhny kay baad hee pata chaly ga na...😉


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ok GD i will do it yes!!!
claps mile to wah maza aa jayega😊
critisize mila to we will share it ok😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Hi poo dear😛
I read d 1st part of ur story, it was amazing.👏
so m waiting 4 d next part.
I think ur story is v different😉
Thnks 4 promoting d girl's power😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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are purvi dear mai b toh wahi keh rhi hu
yeh museum near kala ghoda,nxt to jahangir art gallery
5 mins away from gateway of INDIA

are dear mai is musuem me bohot baar ghoom chuki hu
opposite 2 my colege
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
nice update
very well written
continu soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Nice story stopped in suspense...love ACP Asha ...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: buublly

Hi poo dear😛

I read d 1st part of ur story, it was amazing.👏
so m waiting 4 d next part.
I think ur story is v different😉
Thnks 4 promoting d girl's power😊



thanks di🤗
oh yeah girl power!!!!!😊
i wanted to do something different so i thought will promote girl power, hehehehe😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: rosepink.

are purvi dear mai b toh wahi keh rhi hu
yeh museum near kala ghoda,nxt to jahangir art gallery
5 mins away from gateway of INDIA

are dear mai is musuem me bohot baar ghoom chuki hu
opposite 2 my colege



ohh sorry i thought you were talking about some other museum
really!! lucky di you can visit the museum anytime😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks meru di and viss di
will continue asap😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
GIRLS CID TEAM 5
PART TWO

Hi friends, this is the part two of my girls cid team 5. part one is @ page 11. Do read that for this.
Ok friends hold on to your seat belts cause this roller coaster is going to begin. Why am i calling this a rollercoaster, you will understand once you start, so what are we waiting for lets go...

⭐️ing-
ACP Asha
Tasha
Poorvi
Shreya
Muskaan
Kajal
Dr. Niyati
Dr. Nyla
And Dr. Niyatis computer(one really important star)

scene (continued)-

...Just then ACP Asha's phone rang. She pulled it out from her pocket and answered it without even looking at the screen.
"Hello.. Acp Asha here. Kaun? Oh haan boliye...KYA!!! Are you serious, sach mai,,,,hmmm hum log pahunch rahe hai thodi there mein." Saying so Asha put her phone back in her pocket and was then lost in her thoughts
"Aisa kaise ho sakta hai..." she thought to herself.

"Kya baat hai mam? Kiska phone tha?" Poorvi asked her
"hun.... o Poorvi museum ke director ka phone tha, unhone kaha ki.."
"kya kaha mam, koi pareeshani ki baat hai kya?" Tasha asked
"Vo tasha unhone kaha ki vo jo egypt ki kurti thi na jo chori ho gayi thi"
"haan mam"
"vo kisi ne unhe vapas bhej di hai.."

"Kya!!! Kisne mam." Kajal said
"Kajal unka kehena hai ki unhe aaj subah hi udaylal se parcel mila, jisme unhone vo murti aur udaylal se ek chitthi payii. Unhone ne hume bulaya hai. Ek kaam karte hai. Poorvi, tum aur tasha iss lash ko lekar forensic lab jao aur muskaan tum aur shreya iss udaylal ki kundli  nikalo dost dushman, parivar aur rishtedaar sab kuch, kajal  tum mere saath chalo." Asha said

All the girls nodded. Shreya, kajal and muskaan left with ACP Asha while poorvi and tasha stayed back

"Poorvi ye case kaafi jaldi sulajh gaya na." Tasha said as both the girls bent beside the body
"Haan yaar tasha, iss Udaylal ne apni jaan le li aur to aur usne murti bhi vapas kar di. Magar usne ye murti li hi kyun?" poorvi said as she examined the empty bottle of rat poison beside the body

"Hmm vo jaruur usne uss chithi mein likhi hogi Asha mam gayi hain na. Kher abhi hum log is body ko Dr. Niyati aur Dr. Nyla ke paas bhej dete hai, dekhe to sahin ki Salruke sir ke absence mein ye dono kuch kar opati hai ya nai."

"Haan Salruke sir ke bina lab, jaise ACP ke bina CID."
"Hmm Poorvi hum logon ne ACP ke bina ek case solve kar liya tha vaise."
"To ho sakta hai ki ye dono bhi kamaal kar de, vaise mene suna hai ki salruke sir, ACP Pradyuman sir aur Dr. Niyati teeno ek dusre ke jaani dushman hai." Poorvi and tasha exchange smilES
"Hmm dekhte hai ki Dr. Niyati mein aisa kya hai ki vo humaare Salruke sir aur ACP sir se panga le sakti."

scene 5(at the museum)-

  There was a knock at the door of the directors room. He looked up and then said
"Andar aa jaiye." He said
 ACP Asha opened the door and she followed by Kajal entered the room.
"Thank you mam yahan tak aane ke liye."
"Kahan he vo letter." She asked him
"Mam ye rahi." He said handing Asha a letter

Asha held it in front of her and she and kajal read it. It read-

Dear Mr.Singh(the director),
 I greatly apologies for what i did. I was the one who stole the Egyptian statue from your museum and killed your guard. Reason- i stole it because i had tried to buy it in the auction held for it. Unfortunately another gentleman bought it. I tried to buy it back from him but he always refused.
 After his death this statue was exhibited in your museum. I asked you to sell it to me but the price you gave for it was almost double of what it was being sold at in the auction and the price you put bfore me wasunaffordable. Yet i needed it at any cost so this was the only way i could get it.
 But then i am very sorry for what i did. I have understood my mistake and repent it. So here is your statue back and i have punished myself for robbing this as well as taking your watchmans life. And thus i have killed myself and i also want you to know that all your gaurds were involved in helping me. I could not afford to buy the statue, but i was able to buy your gaurds.
 Don't fire them. All hey did was for money. One of your gaurd whom i killed refused to cooperate, thats why i did it. Greatly apologise. I am sure i must be getting punished up there while you are reading this. Once again sorry.


signed
Udaylal

"Mam iss letter se ye case crystal clear ho gaya hai. Udaylal ne kya kyun kab kiya sab hai issme." Kajal said. Asha thought for a while and said
"Magar kajal Udaylal ne ye murti churai hi kyun mujhe samajh nahi aata, aur to aur agar udaylal itni aachi letter likhta hai, to phir vo sucide note, vo itna ajeeb kyun tha?"

scene 6 (at the forensic lab)-😉

 Dr. Nyla had just taken out some liquid from the body's stomach which contained the poison and had made it ready for the test, while Dr.Niyati was doing something in her computer. Dr.Nyla did not talk much on duty and of course because dr. nyla wqs not talking Dr. Niyati did not say anything as well but would periodically turn towards Nyla.

"Good evening Dr.Nyla and Dr. Niyati." Tasha said as she and poorvi walked in
"Tests ho gaye kya??" Poorvi asked them
"Bus abhi thod der mein." Dr.Nyla said
"Oh Ok." Poorvi aid as she and tasha stood in one side watching the two doctors.
"Tum dono jaa sakte ho jab tests ho jayenge tab hum tumhe phone kar denge ya phir khud aa jayenge." Dr. Niyati said

"Nahi Dr. Niyati vo kya hai na ki ACP Asha ne hum dono ko kaha ki hum reports le kar hi aaye, aur aise bhi app log kyun taklif lenge hum log hai na yahan par." Tasha said
"Theekh hai bacha log magar koi aavaz nahi ok." Nyla said jokingly

"Arre ab to hud paar ho gayi, forensic team bhi mujhe bacha bolne lag agye." Poorvi said irritated
"BHI matlab? Aur kaun bolta hai?" Tasha asked
"Tum log yaar."
"Humne kab tujhe bacha bola."
"Aur nahi to kya humesha youngest member, winnie the poo.. sare naam na mujhe hi dedo."
"Na na poo dear bura mat mano." Tasha said as she bent forward to pull her cheeks
"Dekha phir se..." Poorvi was saying when Dr.Niyati interrupted

"Poorvi ji agar ap bachi nahi hain to bacho ki tarah ro kyun rahi hai." Dr. Niyati said
"Very good point." Tasha commented
"Arre aap log na.." Poorvi was about to say when Dr.Nyla interrupted her
"Come on yaar poorvi, Bura mat maan ye log tujhe taunt kar rahe hai. Aur agar tum badi ho gayi ho to bacho ki tarah aise aavaz kyun kar rahi ho. Do minute ruko, ek baar Dr. Niyati ka computer ready ho jaye hum ye test shuru kar denge."

Poorvi decided it would be wiser if she did not say anything and take this argument further. Meanwhile Tasha asked
"Magar Dr.Nyla hume ye rat kill ka bottle mil gaya hai to phir zeher ko phir se kyun test kar rahe hai?"
"Vo co
"eher
"Mgaded
aise  please


"confirmation ke liye tash
a."
Dr. Nyla said " Dr.Niyati kya aapka computer ready hai."
"Nahi nyla pata nahi kyun ye hang ho raha hai." She said

"Dr. Niyati ye computer kaafi purana lag raha hai, isse phek di jiye aur salruke sir ka computer use kijiye." Tasha said, something she should not have.

 Dr.Niyati looked up angry. Dr. Nyla slapped her head and porvi just watched silently
"Kya kaha...!!!" She said angrily
"S..s.. Sorry agar aapko bura laga."
"Bura laga? mujhe? nahi nahi tasha balki mujhe bahut bura laga. Ek baat yaad rakhna mujhejo bolna hai bolo magar mere iss computer ko kuch bhi bola na to hum dono ye job chodenge."
"Dono?" Tasha asked
"Main aur computer. Aur salruke ka naam mat lo. Vo yahan par nahi hai isliye shanti hai aur uska zikr mere samne mat karo please." She said

Nyla had known this so she did not react in any way but tasha and poorvi were shocked. This time even tasha decided that if she kept quite it would be wiser and safer.
Poorvi bent a little towards her and said.

"Tasha abhi samajh aaya ki ye salruke sir aur ACP sir ki dushman kyun hai."
"Haan yaar. Abhi chup hi rehena behtar hain."

Both of them stood quitly while d. Niyati was still looking at the screen
"Lagta hai wire loose ho gaya hai, tasha dekho to." Dr. Niyati said as Tasha walked towards the computer and bent down to where the wires were clumped together. Everyone in CID knew Tasha was great in computers.
"Nahi Dr. Niyati yahan ke wires to theek hai." She said after looking for a while
"To phir isse kya hua?" Dr. niyati asked

"isse restart kijiye."
" magar usme bahut samaye lag jayega aur upar se ye page lode hone mein kitna samay lag gaya tha. Dekho na, koi to tarika ho ga. Wires ko phir se ckeck karo."
 Tasha wanted to argue that she knew more about computers but she as well as Poorvi knew it would be better to keep quite, so she just bent down to check the wires again, just then the lights in the lab fluttered and then suddenly there was darkness all around.
" Lagta hai current trip ho gaya hai. main dekhti hun." Poorvi said as she pulled out her phone and walked to the main switch box.
"Dr. Niyati." Nyla said
"Haan."
"ab to computer restart karna hi padega
."😉

scene 7(at the beareau)-

 Asha was still looking at the two letters by Udaylal when muskaan and shreya enterd
"Mam saari kundli nikali. Do dushman the iske. Ek business mein aur dusra college se." Muskaan said
"Acha ye jo college ka dushman tha in dono mein dushmani kaise hui."
"Wo mam dono ek hi ladki ko chahte the magar uss ladki ne uday ko chuna aur uske is dost, aakash ko nahi. Isliye akash apne dost se jalta tha. aur to aut iss akash ne bhi vo egyptian murti kharidne ki koshish ki uss auction mein."
"Acha hmm mujhe to isi par shakh ho raha hai. Magar phir bhi hum intezaar karte hai reports ka. Poorvi aur Tasha abhi tak aaye nahi!"
"Mam abhi unhi se phone pe baat ki. Unhone kaha ki unhe thoda samay lagega kyunki computer mein kuch problem ho gaya hai, magar vo jald se jald reports ke saath aane ki koshish karenge." Kajal said entering the room
"Hmm kafi der lag raha hai inko. Tab tak iss Akash ko pakadte hai."
"vahi problem hai mam." Muskaan said "Akaash ka phone nahi lag raha. Sab logon se baat ho gayi sivaye iske. Aur to aur vo ghar pe bhi nahi hai."
"Ghar par bhi nahi hai!"
"Nahi magar akash kiss company mein kaam karta hai uska pata hai humaare paas." Shreya said
"Gaye vahan?" asha asked
"jaane hi wale the mam, socha aap ko ye information de de phir jaaye." Muskaan said
"theekh hai. Kajal tum bhi jao. Ye aakash gadbad hai."

scene 8(at the forensic lab)-😆

 "Hah finally." Niyati said "finally we are ready for the test"
"Dekha mene aapse kaha tha na restart kijiye." Tasha hai
"cha hai trip ho gaya tha varna abhi tak ye computer hung rehta aur kuch problem ho jaata" Nyla said
"hmm ye to hai." Niyati said
"Magar teen ghante to barbaad ho gaye na." Poorvi said in a sleepy voice
"Thekh hai, theekh hai sorry." Niyati said "Nyla carried out the test and Niyati stared at the computer screen while it scanned.

After five minutes Dr. Niyati announced
"Ye rat kill hi hai."
"Kya iska matlab humne teen ghante barbaad kiye." Poorvi said
"Arre nahi nahi sure hona zaaruri tha." Nyla said
poorvi thought to herself "ye sab computer ki vajah se hua hai. Magar abhi Dr. Niyati se argue karne se aacha mein cup hi rahun."

at the beareau-

 Tasha and poorvi walked in with the report
"Sorry mam time lag gaya." Tasha said
"Koi baat nahi kya hai reports?"
"Mam reports kehte hai ki vo zeher chuhe maarne ki daava hi hai." Poorvi said. But before Asha could say anything her phone rang. She pulled it out and pressed it against her ear
"Haan shreya, kya ohh akash vahan se bhi gayab hai. Ohh tumhe uske cabin se photo mili.. saare police station meoin bhijva do... kya jaarurat nahi hai.. ohh akasha ko hum jante hai, kaun... Kya!!! vo aakash hai. sure.Theekh hai museum pahuncho hum bhi aate hai


scene 8(at the museum)-

 Mr. Singh was standing at the window of his room. Just then he saw the CID qualies drive up.
"Lagta hai inhe khooni mil gaya." He thought to himself and walked out of the room to the entrance of the museum
"Hello mam." He said as the cops walked in
"Lagta hai ki aapko khooni ka pata chal gaya."
"haan pata to chal gaya." Asha said
"Kaun hain vo khooni?"
"vahi bataane aaye hai." Shreya said
"to baatiye." Mr. Singh said

"AApko itni kya jaldi hai, usse pehele yaad aaya ki aapne to bataya hi nahi ki aapka pehela naam kya hai." Tasha said
"Mera naam, mere naam ka iss case se kya samabh hai."
"Arre batayeye to sahi, chinta mat kijiya hum batate hai ki khooni kaun hai, opehele aapna pehle naam to bataaye." Poorvi said
"shubhma. Shubham naam hai mera."
"Shubham, aacha naam hai." Shreya said
"Ji shukriya"
"Haan to aapka jo khuni hai uska naam akaash hai. Aap jante hai usko." Muskaan asked
"Nahi mein kisi akaasha ko nahi jaanta
"Kamaal hai na cops. Ye aapne judvaa nhai ko to jaante hi nahi." Asha said
"Judvaa bhai, mera koi judvaa bhai nahi."
"Kamaal hai, are you sure." Asha asked
"Haan mam."

"To phir ye photo iss mein aap hai." Shreya said showing him a picture of himself
"Haan ye mein hi hun ye photo aapke paas kahan se aayi?"
"Vo aapke company waloon ne kaha ye aakasha"
"Haan haan mera judvaa bhai hai na aakasha, ussi ki photo hai."
"Abhi to aapne kaha ki koi bhai nahi hai."
"Nahi nahi hai. vo mein bhul gaya tha."
"Bhul gaye the. ya fir jhooth bol rahe ho?" Tasha asked
"Bhool gaya tha mam."
 None of the cops said anything, instead they just stared at him. He wiped his porehead.
"Bahut paseena aa raha hai akash ji kya baat hai." Poorvi said.
 Mr. Singh urf Aakash looked at them and then he suddenly turned and began to run
 "Hey rukh jao." Tasha said as she poorvi and shreya ran after him.
Aakash was middle aged and could not run so fast thus the young cid girls cught him easily
"Kahan bhag rahe hai aakash ji." Shreya said and gave him a tight slap

scene 9(at the beareau)-

 "Haan mein hi khooni hun. Mene hi Udaylal ko khoon kiya?" He said crying
"Kya hum jaan sakte hai kyun?"
"Darasal mein is museum, ka director nahi hun koi aur hai."
"Kahan hai vo?"
"Mene aur akash ne unka khoon kar diya."
"Magar tum dono to dushman the na."
"Sirf duniya ke liye, hum dono ki dosti kabhi nahi tooti, college mein jo hua uske baad bhi nahi."
"Director kahan hai?"
"Humne unhe maar diya."
"Kyun?"
"Kyunki hume vo egyptian murti chaiye thi. Magr vo director humme bechne ko taayiyaar hi nahi tha. Isliy ye plan banaya aur saare staff ko khareed liya."
"Uday ko kyun maara?"
"Darasal bhale hi hum dono dost the magar mujhe usse dhokha dena pada."
"Kyun?"
"Kyunki jab hum murti beechne gaye to fir jjisse hum murti beechne gaye usne kaha ki uss murti ki keemat 100 crores se bhi zaada hai. Ye sunkar meri Niyat badal gayi. Uday ek ameer vyaapaari tha aur meinek chooti si company ka clerk

"magar tum bhi to Uday jitne hi ameer the na."
"Ameer to tha magar ek din mere ghar mein choori hui aur aaj tak vo chor aur mere paise, dono nahi mile."

"aur phir tumne Uday ka khoon kiya""Darasal meine uday ko vo murti sambhaal ko di. Aur phir ussi ke naukaroon se vo murti choori karva di. Inki baadi murti gayaab thi issi baat se usne aatma hataya kar di.""Aatma hatya!! itni si baat ke liye" itnio""Aur kya karta, police ke baat nahi jaa sakta tha aur mujhe bataane ki himaat nahi ki.""To vo letter usi ne likha.""haan. ""To vo murti tumne vapas kyun ki.""Murti kyun vapas ki.""Jab mujhe laga letterr tma hatya!!" aur vi chitthi bhi likh dii.o mur."

"jab mujhe pata chalaa ki uss murti ki vajah se mere dost ne apni jaan le li to mene ye ehsaas kiya ki yeh sab meri vajah se hua. Isliye mene vo vapis kar di."
"Dost ke naam par kalan ho, aur aur to aur paiso ke liye don logon ki jaan li. Ab to tumhe phaansi hi hogi." Asha said "Le jao isse "Muskaan, shreya and kajal took him.
 ACP Asha's phone rang and she went outside to recieve it.
"tasha, ek baat saff hai."Poorvi said
"Vo kya poorvi?" She asked
"Forensic lab mein vo teen ghaante waste the. Aise bhi un reports ka koi faida nahi hua."
"Ye to hai magar Dr.Niyati aur Nyla ke beech mazaa zarur aaya"
"Hmm vo to theeekh hai magar ab kal aa rahi hai humaari ek aur senior cop."
"Hmm pata nahi kaun ho gi, magar  jo koi bhi ho bas yahi umeed hai ki ACP Asha ki hi tarah ho."
 Poorvi and tasha both exchanged glances and hoped dearly that they would get a good senior.

the end


Edited by poorvisinghcd - 12 years ago

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