ASHA in danger!!!!!(new story @page 34)

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Srishti

@Srishti.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: little_squirrel
very nice.. 😊

thanks a lot di!😊

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Srishti

@Srishti.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: mano86
@PoorviSingh

read both parts together to avoid suspense
😛

⭐️loved ACP ASHA⭐️
n
Dr. Niyati's Computer
👏

the story is

thank you so much di!🤗
and please call me poo😃

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670778

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

i read ist story
it ws awesome 👏

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misha.as

@misha.as

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

I read both parts together. 😊
Its superb story poo... ⭐️👏
cases were very interesting...👏
great dear...⭐️ ⭐️
Well done👍🏼 👏
keep it up...👍🏼 😊

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rosepink

@rosepink.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

vry nice story purvi..
well done👏
acp asha is very dabangg type👍🏼

Hmm dr.niyati ko apne computer se aisa hi lagao h jaisa salunkhe ko apne hairs se😉

loved tasha nd purvi
both are my favourites
😊
all the best 4 ur nxt story..👍🏼

Edited by rosepink. - 12 years ago

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rosepink

@rosepink.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: poorvisinghcd

ohh sorry i thought you were talking about some other museum
really!! lucky di you can visit the museum anytime😛

yup its opp 2 the college,i graduated from,
most famous museum of mumbai
yeah 1 of my fav. hang out places😊

Edited by rosepink. - 12 years ago

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Srishti

@Srishti.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: misha.as
I read both parts together. 😊
Its superb story poo... ⭐️👏
cases were very interesting...👏
great dear...⭐️ ⭐️
Well done👍🏼 👏
keep it up...👍🏼 😊

thanks misha di😳
glad u liked it🤗

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Srishti

@Srishti.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: rosepink.
vry nice story purvi..
well done👏
acp asha is very dabangg type👍🏼

Hmm dr.niyati ko apne computer se aisa hi lagao h jaisa salunkhe ko apne hairs se😉

loved tasha nd purvi
both are my favourites
😊
all the best 4 ur nxt story..👍🏼

thank u soo much di😳
hehehe ya dabang female acp😆
hehehehe thats for sure Dr.Niyati ka comp is like salukhe ke baal and his girlfriend remember😉

even i like tasha a lot and lovee poorvi😃
thank you😊

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sakshi

@sakshitandon

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

awesome story👏 loved the forensic part of it!!!!😛

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

POO bacchay a Little Critical feed back...😉

Apology in Advance...

its really terrific to start any story in that way👏... I really Love the Irritative Conversation between all female Officers about the Addition of Some New Officers...👏⭐️😳

the First part was Excellent...👏👏👏

Ur research work about the Museum, Pyrex Glass, Diamond was Classy...⭐️⭐️⭐️

the whole Egyptian Research about the Auction was Great...👏👏👏

then the Team entry especially NIYATI PARDHAN and NYLA was Beautiful but in between Examine the Body... NYLA said to MAAM ASHA this...😕

"mam iss watchman par jis kisi ne bhi goli chalayi hai vo isse karreban 10 feet ki doori par tha aur jo gun khooni ne istemaal ki hai vo gun bhi mamuli nahi, ye sab hume uss bullet se pata chala jo hume iske shareer main mila."

could U plz elaborate that either they cut the Body at the Spot and its called Wound not Bullet na, kyun kay wo Bullet ko wahan nikalein gay kya as u said kay Bullet Shareer say mila hay, not from the surroundings...😉

but the First Part was fabulous...⭐️

then Part Two started, except that the Difference in Scuide Note and that Letter was the Punch Clue of the Part...⭐️⭐️⭐️

The Case was little Dragged without much Interest...

the Computer part was Lousy Baccha🥱🥱🥱... and yes U told that NIYATI said this...

Aur salruke ka naam mat lo. Vo yahan par nahi hai isliye shanti hai aur uska zikr mere samne mat karo please." She said

Baccha NIYATI never said SALUNKHY with Only His name aur haan NIYATI sirf Two Heads or DUO kay saamnay tang khenchy ki aadi thi... is mein DISRESPECT ka Concept nahi tha...😒

acha about Sr, Cop addition, yaar jahan tak Meri Information hay, except ASHA koi bhi Inspector nahi tha... agar Cop pehlay say sr, Inspector hay so u must added some New one, Right...😉

aur LAVANYA, DIVYANA and KAVERI tou aa rahi hay, bus MRIDULA, ADITI, PRANKA aur ANUSHKA ka intaizar hay...😆