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rosepink

@rosepink.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

kabhi un ka naam lena
kabhi un ki baat karna
mera zauq unki chahat
mera shauq un pe marna
kabhi chalte chalte thamna
aur tham k baith jana
kabhi ladkhada k girna
aur gir k phir sambhalna
kbhi raat raat rona
kbhi din chadhe sisakna
kbhi darya darya rehna
kabhi boond ko tarasna
humesha koi wasta h apna
yehi zindagi h apni
yehi raasta h apna

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Madhu

@cutie006

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

@aman di

nice lines di😛

@rose

hadsaate zindgi

beautiful lines😛

kabhi unka

soo seet lines rose⭐️

tfs👏

@dada

both r awesome 👍🏼 bt q tu achha lagta hai was touchy

Edited by cutie006 - 12 years ago

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Deep,RP, GD... Lovely lines...!!!👏👏

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Madhu

@cutie006

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Posted: 12 years ago

#754

Hi,frnds😛

after ghazal,dis is my first attempt 4 POEM

😛Ek baat tujhe samjhani thi

mere dil ki baat batani thi

kya haal hai mera bin tere

bas aaj tujhe dikhlani thi.❤️

tera hansta hua khila chehra😊

jab samne mere aata tha

gum jaane mujhse dar dar ke

dur kahin kho jaata tha

teri ek hansi ke sadqe me

mujhe jaan apni lootani thi

ek baat...

jab bahte the tere aansu😭

dil ke tukre ho jaate the💔

teri aankhon ke bahte aansu

meri aankhon me aa jaate the

ye aankhe teri na nam ho kabhi

bas baat ye man me thani thi

ek baat ...

⭐️teri ek jhalak pa jane ko

dil rahta tha betab sa kyun

par samne jab tum aate the

har labz lage anjaan sa kyun

ek pal me wo pal beet gaya

waqt ki ye manmani thi😡

ek baat...

kuchh to tha teri baaton me

jo dil ko sukun de jaati thi

ek lamhein me jane kitni

umra meri kat jaati thi

jaadu tha teri baaton ka

ya waqt ki karastani thi

ek baat...

ek lamha aisaa na gujra

jab na tujhko yaad kiya

mil na sake jab rahon me

sapno me mulakaat kiya

kya baat thi tujhme rab jane

main kyun aisee diwani thi

ek baat...

Aur bhi thi baatein kitni

jo karni thi tere aage😆

par gaye jo mud ke dekha nahin

main aayee thi bhage bhage

teri nazron ne kuchh kaha to tha

kya jaan ke main anjaani thi

ek baat...

😭ab beet gaye sadiyan kitni

na wo aaye na khabar unki

kisse aur chaman ka phool tha wo

ya phir meri naadani thi

ek baat use samjhani thi

mere dil ki baat batani thi.😛

Edited by cutie006 - 12 years ago

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Benzaiten

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

So nice GD, RP, and Cutie. 👏

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Anjali

@anjali_mahajan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

Lovely poem cutie , tina(rp)n rahul(gd)

Edited by anjalimahajan - 12 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: cutie006
Hi,frnds😛

after ghazal,dis is my first attempt 4 POEM

😛Ek baat tujhe samjhani thi

mere dil ki baat batani thi

kya haal hai mera bin tere

bas aaj tujhe dikhlani thi.❤️

tera hansta hua khila chehra😊

jab samne mere aata tha

gum jaane mujhse dar dar ke

dur kahin kho jaata tha

teri ek hansi ke sadqe me

mujhe jaan apni lootani thi

ek baat...

jab bahte the tere aansu😭

dil ke tukre ho jaate the💔

teri aankhon ke bahte aansu

meri aankhon me aa jaate the

ye aankhe teri na nam ho kabhi

bas baat ye man me thani thi

ek baat ...

⭐️teri ek jhalak pa jane ko

dil rahta tha betab sa kyun

par samne jab tum aate the

har labz lage anjaan sa kyun

ek pal me wo pal beet gaya

waqt ki ye manmani thi😡

ek baat...

kuchh to tha teri baaton me

jo dil ko sukun de jaati thi

ek lamhein me jane kitni

umra meri kat jaati thi

jaadu tha teri baaton ka

ya waqt ki karastani thi

ek baat...

ek lamha aisaa na gujra

jab na tujhko yaad kiya

mil na sake jab rahon me

sapno me mulakaat kiya

kya baat thi tujhme rab jane

main kyun aisee diwani thi

ek baat...

Aur bhi thi baatein kitni

jo karni thi tere aage😆

par gaye jo mud ke dekha nahin

main aayee thi bhage bhage

teri nazron ne kuchh kaha to tha

kya jaan ke main anjaani thi

ek baat...

😭ab beet gaye sadiyan kitni

na wo aaye na khabar unki

kisse aur chaman ka phool tha wo

ya phir meri naadani thi

ek baat use samjhani thi

mere dil ki baat batani thi.😛

CUTIE baccha Ur First Attemp and the First 2 Stanza's are Shandaar⭐️⭐️⭐️... 3, 4 and 5 one is also Good 👏but somehow I feel U lost the Grip in 6,7 and 8 Stanza...

jub bhi Poem likho ya kuch bhi.😊.. jahan lagay ab samjh nahi aa raha, chor do... theek...👍🏼

Wesay U have a Talent to become a Good Poet in Future...👏

chalo ek humara Kalam bhi...😉

mai kya un ki tareef karun

kuch aajeeb saa hisaab hy;

kabhi by tahasha hain boltii

kabhi hr aik pal saraab hy;

kabhi rung hain bharay huay

kabhi azyatein by hisaab hain;

kabhi mehfilein hain suroor ki

kabhi rat jagun saa aazab hy;

kabhi daairy hain pary huay

kabhi hr lamha ek baab hy;

kabhi iztarab(difficulty) hy maujzun

kabhi khamoshi ka hijaab hy;

kabhi lams(touch) jagayey hr ek ghari

kabhi hr lamha sirf khawab hy...

Edited by gadhadada - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#758

@cutie
lovely poem
its ur first attemp..
really lovely

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

@ Cutie : Very nice poem dear...!!! Congratulations on your first attempt...!!👏⭐️

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#760

Originally posted by: gadhadada
mai kya un ki tareef karun
kuch aajeeb saa hisaab hy;

kabhi by tahasha hain boltii
kabhi hr aik pal saraab hy;

kabhi rung hain bharay huay
kabhi azyatein by hisaab hain;

kabhi mehfilein hain suroor ki
kabhi rat jagun saa aazab hy;

kabhi daairy hain pary huay
kabhi hr lamha ek baab hy;

kabhi iztarab(difficulty) hy maujzun
kabhi khamoshi ka hijaab hy;

kabhi lams(touch) jagayey hr ek ghari
kabhi hr lamha sirf khawab hy...