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Originally posted by: gadhadada

ye dard mit gaya tou phr!

ye zakhm sil gaya tou phr!

bichr k sochta hun mai

wo phr sy mil gaya tou phr!

mai titliyun k shehr mei

rahun tou mujh ko fikr hy

wo phool jo khila nahi

wo phool khil gaya tou phr!

usy bhi kuch nahi mila

mujhy bhi kuch nahi mila

tamam umer k liyey

ye dard mil gaya tou phr!

mai is liyey tou aaj tak

sawal bhi na kr saka

agr mery sawal ka

jawab mil gaya tou phr!

ye theek hy k laut kr

mery he dil mei aayey ga

magr ye soch lo zara

badal ye dil gaya tou phr!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: cutie006

Hi,everyone😛

first time i have tried 2 write a Ghazal.i hope u'll like😛

😛Dil ke tutane par aawaz kahan hoti hai,

Nawj chalti hai magar saans kahan hoti hai.

Sukh jate hain aushk aankh me bathe bathe😭,

Hoth hilte hain par jazbaat kahan hoti hai.

Hum thahar jate hain par waqt thaharta hi nahi,

Din hota hai wahi raat wahi hoti hai.😲

Roz milte hain khayalon me ajnabeyon ki tarah,

Nazarein takrati hai par baat kahan hoti hai.

😲Ek kashti yahan dubi thi kise yaad raha,

Sahil chup hain mozein bhi kahan roti hai.😭

Kis se kahein hum yahan dil ke tutane ka gam,

Aise jurmo ki fariyad kahan hoti hai.😡

Pyar ka naam hi dard hai kahte the sabhi,

Dil mil jaye to ye yaad kahan hoti hai.😳

Dil ke tutane par aawaz kahan hoti hai,

Nawj chalti hai magar saans kahan hoti hai.

nice thread misha😊..lovely poems everyone👏

@GD
ye dard mit gaya toh phr
very lovely bel👏
loved last line
badal ye dil gaya toh phr...
kya baat h
bohot khoob👍🏼

@cutie
dil k tootne par awaaz kahan hoti h...
nice 1st attempt
ye tum ne likha h
i must say u r fabulous👏

waise toh i loved each line of ur gazal
bt i dedicate these 2 lines 2my cutie pie daya😳
roz milte h khyalon me ajnabiyon ki tarah
nazarein takrati h par baat kahan hoti h..😳

@bubbly
meri maa
very lovely nd touchy poem👏
bt y last?😕

Originally posted by: padma_ss

nice thread misha😊..lovely poems everyone👏

thanks padma...😃
wellcome to this thread ...

Thank U S😛😛😛😛😛 much Dada🤗

Originally posted by: cutie006

<font color="#990000">Hi,everyone😛</font>

<font color="#990000">first time i have tried 2 write a Ghazal.i hope u'll like😛</font>

<font color="#990000"><font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">😛Dil ke tutane par aawaz kahan hoti hai,</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Nawj chalti hai magar saans kahan hoti hai.</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Sukh jate hain aushk aankh me bathe bathe😭,</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Hoth hilte hain par jazbaat kahan hoti hai.</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Hum thahar jate hain par waqt thaharta hi nahi,</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Din hota hai wahi raat wahi hoti hai.😲</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Roz milte hain khayalon me ajnabeyon ki tarah,</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Nazarein takrati hai par baat kahan hoti hai.</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">😲Ek kashti yahan dubi thi kise yaad raha,</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Sahil chup hain mozein bhi kahan roti hai.😭</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Kis se kahein hum yahan dil ke tutane ka gam,</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Aise jurmo ki fariyad kahan hoti hai.😡</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Pyar ka naam hi dard hai kahte the sabhi,</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Dil mil jaye to ye yaad kahan hoti hai.😳</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Dil ke tutane par aawaz kahan hoti hai,</font>

<font face="Calibri" color="#990099" size="3">Nawj chalti hai magar saans kahan hoti hai.</font>

</font>

apne Aagaaz Se Aaaj tak Zindagi
Teri Hi Yaad Main Gum Rahi
Phir Bhi Jaane Kyon Yeh Ihsaas Hai
Jaise Chaahat Meri Kam Rahi

Originally posted by: gadhadada

ye dard mit gaya tou phr!

ye zakhm sil gaya tou phr!

bichr k sochta hun mai

wo phr sy mil gaya tou phr!

mai titliyun k shehr mei

rahun tou mujh ko fikr hy

wo phool jo khila nahi

wo phool khil gaya tou phr!

usy bhi kuch nahi mila

mujhy bhi kuch nahi mila

tamam umer k liyey

ye dard mil gaya tou phr!

mai is liyey tou aaj tak

sawal bhi na kr saka

agr mery sawal ka

jawab mil gaya tou phr!

ye theek hy k laut kr

mery he dil mei aayey ga

magr ye soch lo zara

badal ye dil gaya tou phr!!!!!!!!!