Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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megha verma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#791

daya was taking drugs...unbelivabil...

nd ur story is very awesome...waiting for next part...

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Gamayun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#792

Originally posted by: gadhadada
SHERYA... always comes First😆... She really played a Good role as a Reader cz as being a Writer She pointed some errors and its really Good to get a Lesson from it👏... Thank You SHERYA...🤗

Aww thank you GD. I just come first because you post at such a time when all our India boys and girls are out sleeping. 😆 🤗

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Gamayun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#793

GD I have only one word: shocked. 😲 Daya sir aur drugs? Abhijeet sir ki taran main bhi dung reh gayi hoon. 😲

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sherdilali

@sherdilali

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#794

wow new story will read tonight...thank you neeme and gd

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587298

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Posted: 13 years ago

#795

What am i reading? Daya sir takes drugs? And Abhijeet sir is Daya sir😲 Awesome plot Neeme and GD👏
Complete it soon

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Chintan

@ArRoGaNT-CHINTs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#796

@ JAY...

Waiting for the NEXT PART...
Pls UPDATE soon..
have much QUERIES right now...
but will wait for the NEXT... and then will be ASK...
and NICE STORY PLOT. and NICE NARRATION...👏
AMAZING...
After such a long time ...

Keep it up..👍🏼

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aastha94

@aastha94

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#797

wow...what an amazing plot you two have come up with, it just unbelievable. I really love the way you keep the reader interested till the last minute. What an amazing talent you both have.

Just perfect and please post the next chapter asap

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Soni.

@Soni.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#798

sorry i didn't reply earlier even though i read your story first thing in the morning but was on my mob and then mera mummy ne mujhe ghar se bhar nikal diya so i could not use my laptop and when i got back home first thing i did was read your story once again.

wow GD and Neeme i actually don't know what to say. i am totally speechless. the story so far is mind-boggling, interesting, fabulous, brilliant and there are lots more words i want to say but i cannot remember right now. OMG you made daya a drug addict i cannot believe it, this is not fair on him and they way you stopped your story made my heart beat slow.

i really like the part where you abhijeet looked at daya's feet and he jerked up and he said about the ashirwad thing lol that was jokes, tum dono ko ekta kappor ke serials pasand agae kya. and the bit where abhijeet teases daya about his gun that was funny but on the serious note has daya not used his gun before to kill someone in the past 15 years is that true.

once again an amazing plot and so far the best story you have both written please continue soon

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Sheen

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#799

DADA n Neeme Di aap dono ki jodi kamal he 👍🏼

Superb story 👏👏

please post next part as soon as possible

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Posted: 13 years ago

#800

Originally posted by: gadhadada

AMANDEEP... The Girl always at My back😳... trying to take out some from Me and mostly successded😆... Thank You DEEP...🤗