Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#801

@dada n neeme dii
again wonderful job👏
full of suspence
shocking story😲
bt ye kya fir se uncomplete😡
chlo pehle complete kro detail main FB v fir milegi😈😈

Edited by AmanDeep24 - 12 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: Crystalx
the bit where abhijeet teases daya about his gun that was funny but on the serious note has daya not used his gun before to kill someone in the past 15 years is that true.

CRYSTALX that was completely my mistake... just trying to show Tease between Buddies as ABHIJEET Sir Sharp Shot was much famous and DAYA Sir Jhanper... its does not mean that ABHIJEET Sir never Slapped anyone and DAYA Sir never shot anyone... its just a Teasing refrence of their Famous qualities in view of readers... but that was completely my mistake... I just realize it after someone pointing out but it was little late to change it as the Part was posted by NEEME DII and she was Offline at that moment and I have No other Opening Lines in my mind to Restart this Story...

but I apologize... i m so Sorry as DAYA Sir used His Gun in CID lots more time...

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sherdilali

@sherdilali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#803

Really nice plot new experience by Daya and you too.waiting for next part plz dont make it too much emotional add some more action.

yaro itna neend ka zikar...mje bhi bar bar neend ka parh ke neend hi aa gai ke me yhen so gai see how impressive you wrote😉

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

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Posted: 12 years ago

#804

shocking indeed!😲 but seems to be a good research work!👏 plz continue soon!

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Sheen

@..Princess..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: gadhadada

MAXXX... My Admirer so always at my Baccha Party Line and List😳... Thank you🤗

your welcome DADA 🤗

Edited by Maxxxxxxx - 12 years ago

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Soni.

@Soni.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: gadhadada

CRYSTALX that was completely my mistake... just trying to show Tease between Buddies as ABHIJEET Sir Sharp Shot was much famous and DAYA Sir Jhanper... its does not mean that ABHIJEET Sir never Slapped anyone and DAYA Sir never shot anyone... its just a Teasing refrence of their Famous qualities in view of readers... but that was completely my mistake... I just realize it after someone pointing out but it was little late to change it as the Part was posted by NEEME DII and she was Offline at that moment and I have No other Opening Lines in my mind to Restart this Story...
but I apologize... i m so Sorry as DAYA Sir used His Gun in CID lots more time...

oh it's okay please don't say sorry i didn't understand that part that's why i was asking about it. i didn't want to make you feel bad i am sorry that i didn't read the part where you mentioned about the blunder you made sorry.

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Sakshi.. Angel..

@Reserved_angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#807

Dada n neeme dii no words to say... like we r waiting for the next part u also wait will say anything after the whole story... abhi sir n mine condition r same.. daya sir taking drugs...can't even imagine.. daya sir ko sab itne bhaav de rhe h apki stories me n FW iska 1/4 part tak nhi show karti.. khaiir waiting... Dada sahi kaha tha aapne apka dimaag raatko bhi chalta h sote sote.. kuch karo boss!! 🤣