Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

Omg I'm in love with this story. It's turning extremely addictive now. Loved this part a lot and waiting for the next :D

I knew this guy Samar isn't Samar, but Sr. Ins. Daya. The interaction scenes between him and team, specially with Abhijeet were heart wrenching. I could understand Samar aka Daya's condition on the way everybody behaved with him. These sections were the highlights of part 2. The suspense is well maintained and I wonder what's the exact matter. This Col is so stupid!

The last part was awesome, samar aka Daya uttered the right name, by mistake ofcourse :P
Now let's see how Abhijeet confronts him.

Neeme di's plot is simply mindblowing.

I've no words for Dada...

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megha verma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

story is very nic...plzz post third part fast...

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 12 years ago

#663

Guys no joking this time. 😉

It was quite obvious that Samar is Daya sir. I loved his scenes with the team. They were so emotional. The suspense is awesome.

Please do continue soon...

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Soni.

@Soni.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

another fantastic story by neeme and GD i am seriously adicteted to your stories this one is the best really nice even i think that person is Daya not Samar. what did ACP mean that col ranawat wanted to kill Samar or did the terrists wanted to kill him, anyway what a lovely story you two should became proper writers and sell your books as combine production i bet you will sell a lot as i will be the first person to buy it. just totally in love with your stories the suspense in the story and way that Abhijeet remembered daya was so emotional

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Forfriend

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

OMG I thought its a complete story but continuation again

This part is tooo good... so much emotions...

have so many questions...

Please ans them all ssoon...

GR8 work DADA and NEEME 🤗

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neeme

@neeme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Thank You Guys... The basic Motive is Equal suspense and Emotions.. Bcz According to the Plot Emotions Are Very improtant as well.. We really worked on this..Thanks for Liking Once again..

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670778

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Posted: 12 years ago

#667

@both
pehle complete kro fir fb milegi;>
kb samar khega abhi main tumara daya hu:)
cant wait..post asap

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri
Guys no joking this time. 😉

Shuker😆

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: Crystalx
another fantastic story by neeme and GD i am seriously adicteted to your stories this one is the best really nice even i think that person is Daya not Samar. what did ACP mean that col ranawat wanted to kill Samar or did the terrists wanted to kill him, anyway what a lovely story you two should became proper writers and sell your books as combine production i bet you will sell a lot as i will be the first person to buy it. just totally in love with your stories the suspense in the story and way that Abhijeet remembered daya was so emotional

No COL RANAWUT wanted to kill SAMAR...

not the terrorests...