Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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aap dono se meri kutti🤢
jao baat nhi krni ab
fir se adhoori😡

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri
@ Neeme: Excuses, excuses. *in a haughty tone* 😆

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I thought this part would be concluding but it isn't. The last part was just great and I was looking forward to read how Abhijeet confronts Samar aka Daya. The scenes were simply touching and the dialogues made them out of the world. The real suspense regarding the mission is still on and I'm dying to read the part exposing the exact thing.

I just keep on repeating myself with every new story but this time I must admit, this story has become extremely addictive. It's painful to accept this isn't being shown in the real show as I get a feeling of watching everything live.

This part was short than usual and sadly Abhijeet couldn't prove the fact that Samar is Daya. I just thought how someone would feel when he/she has to accept the person they love has departed and someone else has got an identical face and all. I wonder what they would be feeling after looking at Samar.

Continue soon!

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halfbloodprince

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I wonder mere posts aise kyun ho jate hain, sentimental type 😆

Dada you're simply the best when it comes to write sad parts.

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Sheen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I'll comment after reading all 3 parts 😊

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mahrukh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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This part was also amazing... i thought this will be a last part but again u have decided to kill me from suspence... please continue soon... cant wait to read next part., great job neeme n GD...

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Shruti Chatterjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: neeme
@Sri, Kon sa Parson??? I m very Busy in these days.. Yah b pata nae kasa Kyea ha.. and GD asked me To post all parts... So Uss sa Koe umeed b mat rakna 😆
@Shreela, What to do..Ur tension and Excitment is Our Sucess naa.. Plz Saber ka damn tamo..saber ka Phal Meeta hota ha 😆

And All Ager Samer Samer He Hoe... Tu App sab huma mahf kar dana😳😳..

it does not matter actually, but our Daya sir is alright na?😕 u will bring him back at the end, na??