Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147) - Page 32

Originally posted by: maggi.masala

Amazing story dada...
Duo convo was very cute and funny..😳
Esp that jaar, plane n shadishuda...😆...all was too gud..
Grt wrk dada...

Originally posted by: Forfriends

Hey DADA its really funny Light Movements of Duo are so good 👏

Yaar 😆

DAYA tried but the result was not about their expectation' ABHIJEET added'

ABHIJEET: acha rehnay do' main Cutter lay ker aata hun' lagta hay Kaatna paray ga'

DAYA (shock): Haath'!!!

ABHIJEET (pat on His head): aye Bhagwaan' aby bewakoof' Jaar'!! 😆

Its too Funny yaar 😆

Enjoyed it 👍🏼

Bas thoda clearification kar dete ki itane sare attacks kisane kiye toh or maja aata... 😕

But Yes u deserve 🤗

Originally posted by: DreamyDeepz28

Hey Dada 😊,

Iam happy to read and finish early this time 😃.

thank U😳

This time I have a mixed response. I was a bit of surprised to find it a story sort of 😕.

I found the story really long.

yup i was trying to write something else but KHICRI Pak gayii...😆😆

Mujhey lagtha hain hain ki tum bohoth jaldi mein thi to post the story. Beech beech mein woh hospital incidents bohoth hurry mein likha gaya hain yesa mujhey laga.

obviously Story ki Khicri Pak gayii na...😆

I felt ki jab ek bar hospitalise hona accident hota... par bar bar again hospitalised made me laugh with the writing style...😆.

oopsss...😆😆

Woh Daya ka Pizza mangvaana was something unexpected 😛 Kyuni we never seen such thing on TV 😛

yup even its Normal Normally with Us😳... ...yaar Hum tou Farmaish ker kay ya cheen jhapat kay Kahtay hain...😛😆

Mujhey Daya ka Abhi bulaana was nice to read 😊 ( never seen yet on TV)

no hear it in ABHIJEET IN COMMA where at Initial Shot BHAI call Him ABHI when tried to Regain His Concious...😳😳

The 10,000 bill ki baath bhi kaafi mazedaar raha 'cab mein safar kia ya plane mein ' 😆😛

BHAI is Naughty na... 😳😆

Aur yeh kyaa Daya ka haath jar mein phas gaya 😆

Bilkul😆😆

Daya ka mein shaadishuda bolna was quiet naugty one 😛

hehehheheh 😆😆

Ultimately yes where is the killer ? 😆😆😆

Correct... 😆😉

Generally don't feel bad I found i difficult to go through because spelling errors theh... and I felt it was rushed very much... Agar slowly and steadily likha jaatha toh maza aa jatha ...

Sorry boss... for Spelling Errors and Rush...

But I enjoyed reading it Dada..

That is the most important thing Right 😊 So GOOD JOB 👏

Keep Bringing more 😃

THANK U so much for UR Honest FEEDBACK... 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: gadhadada

JAAR Awesome😆

THANK U... 😳

Originally posted by: Soniya..Shapath

Superb story really so funny

Originally posted by: vevah

wonderful story dada

luv "DUO" convo @ the best

me2 fond of Sanjeev Kapoor's cuking😉,n lyked Hiz KHANA KHAZANA az well 😊

@ sum places found a bunch of confusionz,but still it wz Nice Khichri 😛

@ last i wz Confused that really WHERE'z the Killer ???

finally saanp i mean Ashoke bina laathi k hi marr gaya ,

chalo is bar chala lete hain😛but reallly missed the Tarrkaa of ur Flavour in ths KHICHRI 😳

@ last a tight 🤗 for ths Khichri😃