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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#151

It reminded me of the story Vis wrote last time during the story contest... Abhijeet ke dulhan ka raaz... how abhijeet was sad because of getting married forcibally... and the way they struggle to get abhijeet divorced😆

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shalini.cid

@shalini.cid

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#152

ohhh yes!!!! to rescue daya he marries n to save him comes KD

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Add some more masala.

Imagine a scene in your version of AKA 10 with Maya, Tji and Survi all in one scene with Abhijeet. 🤣 Let Shruti also appear. That makes it an awesome 4some!!!

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago

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shalini.cid

@shalini.cid

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#154

abhijeeet would be like😕😲 yeh sab kaha se aaya??? wonderful scene hoga with the foursome!!! im trying to imagine if they come to the bureau the reactrions of Daya n APC sir!!!!!!!

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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Redone the last day

On the last day

Daya: Abhijeet... yeh tumhe ho kya gaya... kahin tum un sapno ke baare mein toh pareshaan nahi ho

Abhijeet: Haan...Daya ,,, mai dekhtha hoon ki maine Survi se shaadi ki hai...phir tarika ji...

Suddenly Maya enters

Maya: kya...tumhaari shaadi ho chuki hai,... mai nahi maan sakthi ... mai tumse pyar karne lagi thi...aur tum.. tumne mujh se yeh baat chupaayi...kyon

Abhijeet: (confused)Kya...tum..pyaar...😲(angrily) maine kaha na... mai kisi se pyar nahi kartha...akela chod do mujhe

Tarika standing there starts crying loudly😭

Suddenly shruthi enters

Shruthi: Abhijeet ji... kaise hai aap... maine suna ki aapki tabiyat theek nahi hai toh mai..bhaagi chali aayi...aapke liye...

Abhijeet: (confused)shruthi ji aap...yahaan is waqt ...(angry)mai jaantha hoon... yeh sab... aap logon ki chaal hai...mujhe CID se nikaalne ka

Shruthi: nahi abhijeet ji... mai toh bas... aap ka saah dene aayi thi

Suddenly survi enters

Abhijeet: Survi... tum...

ACP: hum laaye hai survi ko...

Survi: abhijeet... mujhe tum se ek baat kehni thi... abhijeet... mai tumse pyar toh bahut karthi thi...aur karthi hoon.. lekin humaari shaadhi hui nahi

Abhijeet: kya.. phir ..woh jo mujhe hamesha dikhtha hai

ACP: Arey Abhijeet tumne toh survi se sirf shaadi ka naatak kiya tha... woh criminal ko pakadne ke liye jo shaadi mein dulha dulhan ka khoon kartha tha.

Survi: haan abhijeet... meri tum se shaadi kabhie hui hi nahi

Abhijeet: Thank you ACP saab.. aapne mere sar se itna bada bojh hata diya...

ACP: arey abhijeet is mein shukrya ki kya baat hai...

Abhijeet now turns behind and finds Tarika, Shruthi, Maya and survi standing there...looking at him...

he looks at all 4 of them!!!!!!

Abhijeet faints again!!!!!! 😆

This is written in a sarcastic way.. and even in my wildest dreams or nightmares i or actually anybody on IF ... will never want to see this thing coming true

Request - Guys please don't scold me 😛

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#156

EEEKKKSSS!!!

🤢

I'll show this to Adi sir if I ever meet him and tell this is written by Astonish!!! 😉

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#157

Pass me those knives you were playing with ... Vis ... I'm going to kill astonish for this ... 😆 ... I never thought I'll laugh so badly reading Abhijeet faints !!!! Yeh kya kiya tumne astonish ... tumhe nahin baksha jaayega !!!! I'm printing this page out to show it to Adi sir if I meet him again !!!! Or even more wicked ... I'll do some ghapla ... replace Abhijeet with Daya ... and the gals names with Daya's pasts ... and show it to him ... saying you wrote it 😈

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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Nahiii,...yeh naainsaafi hai... The last part is Vis's brain child 😛

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#159

One for each ... the last time's Abhijeet ke Dulhann by Vis to show to Adi sir ... and this one with names replaced by astonish for Daya sir ... huuhaaaheee ... 😈 ... ab dekhna !!!!! 😛

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Bhavanab
Or even more wicked ... I'll do some ghapla ... replace Abhijeet with Daya ... and the gals names with Daya's pasts ... and show it to him ... saying you wrote it 😈

No use Bhav, it wont be the same. Daya hasn't had so many romantic flings.;-)