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shalini.cid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

wow!!!! looking forward to read alll ur stories...

@vis dii ---- aapne sonali ko laaya aur ab purvi ko bhi??? omg!!! if u r plz dont leave our pppooorrr daya sir miserable!!!

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Who knows ... I'm afraid she might bring back ...Survi instead of Purvi !!!! 😲 ... hehehehe ... na she won't put herself through the torture !!! Hehehe ... let's not give her ideas ... she's Vis afterall ... koi bharosa nahi hai ... 😆

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shalini.cid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

hehehehe voh toh hai!!!! but one thing i must admit... whatever she comes with is alwayyys AWESOME👏

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: shalini.cid
hehehehe voh toh hai!!!! but one thing i must admit... whatever she comes with is alwayyys AWESOME👏

Come on...don't have such high hopes. Mine is just an Nk classic with some more masala from me.😈

An Abhijeet ka ateeth showing an incident with Survi 15 saal pehle is not a bad idea.

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago

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shalini.cid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

NK ??? whose NK?? n wats MB???

yh yh... survi wasnt alll that bad!!!! lolz... i loved the each of their (daya, acp n abhijeet) while reading the letter

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Nitika Kanwar. One of the present CID writers.

MB - Meera Bai.

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mallikaBalu

@mallikaBalu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Who or which Meera Bai are you people refering to?

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astonish

@astonish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

AKA with survi is not a bad idea if we write... but if FW writes it then

Abhijeet ke ateet ka raaz - series 2

If FW makes it then...it might turn out to have some of these parts in it

Abhijeet gets hit on his head again...and for a change Tarika takes him home. 😉

She leaves and abhijeet tries to sleep. He suddenly sees himself... in dress of a dulha... getting married to survi 😲 He gets up with a jerk...in a shock state. 😆

Next day.. abhijeet reaches bureau ... looks very lost... and then from there they go to Forensic lab for some case... he sees Dr Tarika there...

Dr Tarika: Kaise ho abhijeet...(with care and concern)???

Abhijeet: (angry): mai...theek hoon...mujhe kuch nahi hua... tumhe meri fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi

Tarika in tears

After some time.. (can be next case) Abhijeet faints

Dr Tarika takes him to hospital...

Abhijeet: Tarika...tum yahaan se chale jao... mujhe akela chod do

Continues like it did in AKA between Daya sir and Abhi sir

and on the last day

Daya: Abhijeet... yeh tumhe ho kya gaya... kahin tum un sapno ke baare mein toh pareshaan nahi ho

Abhijeet: Haan...Daya ,,, mai dekhtha hoon ki maine Survi se shaadi ki hai...phir tarika ji...

ACP: Arey Abhijeet tumne toh survi se sirf shaadi ka naatak kiya tha... woh criminal ko pakadne ke liye jo shaadi mein dulha dulhan ka khoon kartha tha.

Survi enters

Survi: haan abhijeet... meri tum se shaadi kabhie hui hi nahi

This is written in a sarcastic way.. and even in my wildest dreams or nightmares i or actually anybody on IF ... will never want to see this thing coming true

Request - Guys please don't scold me 😛

Edited by astonish - 14 years ago

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

🤣 I can imagine it!!!!

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shalini.cid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#150

🤣🤣🤣 lolzzz... pooor abhi sir!!! it reminds of a story in CID funny stories thread... where they come to meet abhi sir... n daya claims he is joseph, asha - fatima etc.