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astonish

@astonish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: visrom
I was planning something else too, but I fear hurting people's feelings...what if it's Sachin-centric? Will you all get upset?

😲 Sachin centric??? Yaani making sachin the villain... and Abhi sir and Daya sir shooting him 😛

😉😆

Just kidding... Vis... I think you should give a try... We are always 😡 about sachin because he is AB... and eating everyone else's dialogs .. aap toh team distribution correct hi karenge.. Sachin centric case mein Daya sir aur Abhi sir ko Mr India toh banaayenge nahi.. so... i think it will be a different experience.. altogether,...

We'll atleast come to know if we have a problem with the person or the character 😊

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: visrom
I was planning something else too, but I fear hurting people's feelings...what if it's Sachin-centric? Will you all get upset?

Behroopiya ?? With sachin as Behroopiya ... and climax coming to a standstill on no surprises thr nrxt week ??? Cool na !!! Or maybe Nikhil instead 😆

Kabarwali ladki kaunsa hai ??? Maine miss kiya hoga ... description se lag raha hai 😆

How about maut ka aashirwaad ... ya the one before that ... erase 2 people entry totally 😆

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Menrva

@Minionite

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Bhavanab

Behroopiya ?? With sachin as Behroopiya ... and climax coming to a standstill on no surprises thr nrxt week ??? Cool na !!! Or maybe Nikhil instead 😆

Kabarwali ladki kaunsa hai ??? Maine miss kiya hoga ... description se lag raha hai 😆

How about maut ka aashirwaad ... ya the one before that ... erase 2 people entry totally 😆

I don't remember Kabarwali Ladki. Is that a good sign or what? 😆

Go ahead Vis di. Make it Sachin centric. It depends on the story right?

I was thinking of remaking the Case of the Wedding Blues. It's got an interesting plot, but I had a new idea for it. I'm still thinking though. Ever since I read this, I've been watching all the cases from the beginning of my YT channel and I've reached 2002. Still haven't found anything, except for the Case of the Wedding Blues. The ending was a bit rushed in it and that's why I thought of it. Maybe I'll get something else as well.

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Bhavanab

Behroopiya ?? With sachin as Behroopiya ... and climax coming to a standstill on no surprises thr nrxt week ??? Cool na !!! Or maybe Nikhil instead 😆

Lovely idea...I'll make Daya cry his eyes out. I am sure you all will be thrilled.

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Daya would have cried out if it was Nikhil 😉

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Bhavanab
Daya would have cried out if it was Nikhil 😉

Sachin is no less, ok? Just look at last Saturday's episode...the moment he comes out of the box, he first shouts 'SACHIN!!!' and then the guy calls on the mobile, what does he first ask 'SACHIN KAHAN HAI'...They both had even seen the bad guys carrying an unconscious Vivek...Daya wasn't even thinking of Vivek. His first concern was Sachin.

C'mon...I am damn sure Daya will be very very upset if something happens to his dear friend Sachin.

I am going to write a tearjerker.

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago

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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Hmm... It is very very tuf vis... Tear jerker toh mushkil hai... Because we may start crying reading that daya sir is in tears... But then the moment we see the reason for daya sir's tears... We will be 😃 peeda vadilindhi 😉 types so... Khushi aur gham neutralize ho jaayega

Take it as a challenge... Your success rate will depend on the number of tears 😛 😉
What say???

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: astonish
Hmm... It is very very tuf vis... Tear jerker toh mushkil hai... Because we may start crying reading that daya sir is in tears... But then the moment we see the reason for daya sir's tears... We will be 😃 peeda vadilindhi 😉 types so... Khushi aur gham neutralize ho jaayega

Take it as a challenge... Your success rate will depend on the number of tears 😛 😉
What say???

On a serious note, I really don't want to make Daya cry. At least not for this reason.

EDIT: I started my story - an NK classic. I wrote about 3 pages in true NK style and ran out of steam. Will continue...time hai na...

I just read what I wrote and it's absolutely stupid!!!!😆 If I don't submit it (to whom????) I will end up deleting it.

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago

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Menrva

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

I started writing something for the Wedding Blues and then my computer crashed and bang, everything disappeared. I'm thinking of calling in Sachin to fix that problem. 😆