improved version of cid..on eve of friendship day

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neeme

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Yah Story thread hi ha 😕😕😕

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

abhijeet:purvi wo sachin bata raha tha ke un orphan home ke bachonke saath kuch bura ho raha hai...

purvi: par sir kya bura ho raha hai...mera matlab kya une koi takleef deta hai... acp:purvi ye sachin bhi na... kuch pura information nahi lata..😆...par kisine uspe hamla kyun kiya???? daya: sir kya hum fir se us orphan home mein jake dekhe...😛

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Soonaali

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Posted: 14 years ago

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DADA DA and All its an request... I reserve CC # 12 for all types of discussion on story s please join it... ysha pe sirf stry post karte hai... Please...

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Soonaali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

ACP: DAYA tum sahi keh rahai ho hume orphanage home jake hi dekhan hoga... Per agar waha kuch ho rahai... toh humare wahape jane pata chalana thoda mushakil hai...

Abhijeet: sir phit toh hume woh dusara tarika aaj mana hoga...

Daya: Haan sir... ussase sari sachayi samane aa jayegi...

ACP: thik hai... per sambhal kar... bachoki bat hai... unhe koi taklif nahi honi chahiye...

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: dayakhtar

sorry

its okkk da...😉😉

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

at hospital

abhijeet: sachin tume unke bare mein kaise pata chala

sachin: sir... mere informer ne bataya ki ye orphan home se bacchonko istamal kiya jata hai...aur kisi bangle making factory mein bheja jata hai...aur sir usne muje ye bhi bataya{ it is told in action v dont here it}

in a small village

daya n abhi in disguise daya to a gentlemen walking by: arre ye suna hai yaha kahi baccho ko bikne ka ghar hai... gentlemen: arre tummm kaunn ho... muje kuch nahi pata...yaha to sirf orphan home hai... abhi chewing paan: oyee jyada waqt barbad maat kar apunka... apunko skaram ne bheja hai... gentlemen:arre bhai kaha na mein to yaha naya naya hoon... abhi showing him a bracelet n daya taking up his hand: aur tum ka ye haath ka bracelet hai bhai ne diya hai... gentlemen: ooo to pehle batana chahiye tha na apunko saab... us taraf jao aur dekho ramakant milega{paan wala}

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

here kajal n purvi r dressed like a small village women n go to that orphan home...

purvi: <to manager>: saab hum bahot garib log hai...hume kaam milega...

kajal: humare bacchonka pet bharna hai...saab humpar daya karo...

manager: nahi...dekho ye orphan home hai...yaha ...kisiko bhi nahi lete hum...

purvi: dekho hum apko koi takleef nahi denge saab...,,

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cid_duo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

gud job all👏
i will try in next story😊

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Moner_Radio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

manager : maine kaha na, hum kisi ko kaam pe nahi rakhte !!

purvi : sahab hum garibo par raham karo sahab !!

kajal : haa sahab, hum apna kaam thik se karenge, bachcho ka khub khayal rahenge..aapko koi shikayt ka mauka nahi denge !!

purvi : aap bas hume koi bhi kaam de do sahab, aapne ghar me bhi bachche hai sahab..hume bachcho ka khayal rakhna aata hai sahab !!

manager ( trying hard to stop dem while dey r saying all dis but in vain ) : yar yeh kya musibat hai..kya karu main ab.. yeh dono to jaise piche hi padh gayi !! achcha chalo thik hai, tum dono kaam karoge yaha par..tum ( to purvi ) , tum bachhcho ka khana banaoge ..aur tum ( to kajal ) , tum yaha ka saara jhadu-pocha karogi . thik hai ??

both : thik hai sab, aapka bhala ho sahab..aapne bahut badi meherbani ki humpe sahab !!

manager : thik hai..( luking at his clock..it's already aftrnun ) aaj chod do, tum log kal se aajana kaam par, waise naam kya bataya tumlogo ne ??

kajal - sahab, mera naam kamla .

purvi - mera naam jamuna hai sahab .

manager - thik hai, kal se aa jana.