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.Crystal.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Sounds really interesting...plz post more soon 😃

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anonymous7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

I have added chapter 2 on my 2nd post.............. check it out.😊

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cid-cop

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Just read the second chapter..frankly speaking, I didnt like it when you included Sachin in the seniors' gang..but it is just my personal opinion..i don't have anything against him, but I think he still holds a junior rank since he is one of the newest members in the team.

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Soonaali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Daya teasing abhijeet and after that save from ACP sir's anger..... Good one yaar.....
Ya but its too hard to diagest Sachin as senior member but the u show him fumbling..... Acha laga....
Hope in third part suspens ll increas...

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589799

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

OMG!! It is brilliant. I loved it. I loved the way you build up the suspense. It is really interesting. Loved it. Great job, 👏

Waiting for your next part. 😊I loved that you showed Sachin fumbling. 😉

Edited by ymanjushree10 - 14 years ago

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DEEPIKA BANERJEE

@deepikabanerjee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

😆 😆...abhijeet spouting water from his mouth....good going...and even kaajal has khabris now....hope they dont have oscillating ponytails..😆

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anonymous7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

well, i actually named Sachin as a senior because of his rank only............... of course Vivek is way better than him!

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cid_duo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

sorry dk 4 late reply........just read now even promo.........sound intersting plot😊
hmmm a little bit problem in hindi😉
but u dont worry 'll manage......
daya prank on abhi.....so sweet😊
please complete soon..........waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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anonymous7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

thnx for the reviews.......... guys.

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Debasree

@debasree04

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Darkknight.....👏 read 2nd chapter ....really liked it.....come on yaar plz complete soon....patience rakhna muskil hai.... just joking....take ur time & complete it .....really waiting for next chapters....