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DEEPIKA BANERJEE

@deepikabanerjee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#311

please read my creation on AKAKR series thread

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#312

Link to Deepika's poem on AKAKR

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/cid/1585710/abhijeet-ke-ateet-ka-raaz-main-series-thread-ii

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Nandini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#313

If you post the poem here also I would be oblidged!

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DEEPIKA BANERJEE

@deepikabanerjee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#314

A RECAPITULATION OF ABHIJEET KE ATEET KA RAAZ

(pardon me for my mistakes)

As 2011 approached we were delivered a shocker

we looked on as we were struck with a burgeoning horror

a dreadful promo flashed across the screen

leaving our countenances sickeningly green

our beloved abhijeet was seen smirking like the devil

possessing bloodthirsty eyes as though out on a kill

the saviour hand committed a heinous act

shooting at acp-daya caused our hearts to painfully contract

we were made to wait for this to begin hence

the lasting of our peace and sanity was rendered askance

on 24th began our nightmare

with a fire of fear continuing to flare

throughout it seemed all hunky-dory

then approached the end of the story

abhijeet as seen hurting his head

thus signalling the beginning of our dread

images began to flash which he discerned as his past

seen himself as a miscreant was a horrific blast

FW began to heap sorrows upon us

watching a pained abhijeet became a curse

then came the heart-wrenching shock treatment

making us dread about abhijeet's predicament

abhijeet's conduct began to run amok

helplessly we sat gaping in shock

then abhijeet dealt another blow

his resignation caused tides of tears to flow

daya couldnt abandon his friend

traced him though now his eyes blazed like a fiend

harsh words spewed like venom

hurt was left daya as this brutality he couldnt fathom

the ugly heads began to rear of maya-amit

thus triggering the dubious gambit

daya still hoped for a chance to mend

but abhijeet's rebuff signaled he wouldnt bend

then for the acp came the chilling call

making us think on our lives it will take a toll

the voice that made miscreants quake

was threatening that innocent lives its owner would take

acp ran hurriedly here and there

requesting the sparing of lives whose conduct wasnt fair

the baffled CIDians entered the place of death

while abhijeet lurked behind them in stealth

acp fell to the blow of his blue-eyed boy

while from daya's countenance was gone all joy]

when a seemed lost acp sir rose

abhijeet's fake encounter proved that CID he chose

all was going to come well as the end was nearing

the gathering dark clouds of the past few days were clearing

soon the villains were brought to subjugation

a joyous time was coming for celebration

abhijeet's past too was cleared

seeing dilip alive he cheered

that his hand hadnt delivered a brutal act

ensured that his goodness was intact

soon abhi-daya friendship was restored

LONG LIVE CID, we all encored

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

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Posted: 14 years ago

#315

Thanks for posting the poem here Deepika!!!!😃

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#316

Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you

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sayhi2su

@sayhi2su

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Posted: 14 years ago

#317

nice poem with a summary

great work👏

thanks

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#318

A small gift for all CID fans who share the same emotions for Aditya-Dayanand Shetty
Following is the link to some wonderfull stories written by a wonderfull person Please read and post your comments on this thread please

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1372422