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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Sorry yaar....some one else also asked me thru PM. I tried it and it became too messy...the sentences were all going haywire, breaking at odd places and all.

In the next contest, I'll specify the font size too.

If you are finding it difficult, pls use the View-.Zoom option on Internet Explorer.

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago

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Gamayun

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

+ 51

Team Silver Trio

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

I've just finished reading all the stories and I liked them. Many of them used our tried and tested Fireworks method and some of the famous dialogues, like Boss, Haan Daya 😆

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: luv_cid_shreya
I've just finished reading all the stories and I liked them. Many of them used our tried and tested Fireworks method and some of the famous dialogues, like Boss, Haan Daya 😆

if don't mind,can you please give your feedbacks on each story

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

hey... ppl...

i was really in shock condition after read VISROM DII comments.... i knew i m really XTRA ORDINARY BAD in DETECTION/CRIME cases.... but
wat a classical comment she gave on my story.... 'never tried'.... its just ZABARDAST to me.... hmmmm... abot SHREELA.... its quite amazing that she knew me... may be coz 3 more stories was there of mine.... ya DII i try... but a FLOP TRY.... ok.... but kya karein....
i'll NEVER TRY IT in FUTURE.... ok....
all other stories are marvellous.... untill i read only 4 in random order... but they are xtremelly beautiful... how could people write such things... which are WOW....

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: gadhadada
hey... ppl...

i was really in shock condition after read VISROM DII comments.... i knew i m really XTRA ORDINARY BAD in DETECTION/CRIME cases.... but
wat a classical comment she gave on my story.... 'never tried'.... its just ZABARDAST to me....

Now Gadhadada, there was no need for you to reveal yourself at this stage. 😆 I didn't even look at the writer's name, nothing has been registered in my brain, though I know each sender.

And why are you shocked? I gave my frank opinion and I didn't say anything bad about the story. just that you deviated from the plot. My other post has clarified that many others have done it too.

What is 'never tried' and why has it bothered you? I never said that you 'never tried' hard to write a good story or anything. You seem to be twisting my words. I meant that 'I never tried putting on sunglasses in a car to check whether it becomes foggy'.

If my words hurt you, I am sorry. Guys and girls who have participated, you must be ready to take frank comments, otherwise I'll take off my existing comments and stop posting any more comments, I'll just put the scores.

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Gamayun

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

+ 51

Team Silver Trio

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: bhinder.kamboj

if don't mind,can you please give your feedbacks on each story

I wanted to do that, but I lost the file where I was saving my feedback. My Internet was down for a few days, so I had copied the files into a Word file and saved my feedback in a Word file, but then my computer crashed and I lost the Word file. As far as feedback goes, I'm mostly on line with what the others are saying about the stories. Sorry I can't remember individual feedback, but I remember that 3 or 4 of the stories didn't actually cover the complete plot, that is, there were parts of the plot missing or there was a complete deviation from the plot. Otherwise, I liked all the stories. 😕

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

i think I have also touched plot with left hand.... So jisne jisne aisa kiya hain, are they out of contest or what?

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Bhinder stop getting worried !!! Each and every story is very much there in the contest !!!

I've finished reading almost all !! Will post detailed review for all together