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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

My internet is up and I have finally managed to read it properly once again. I read it yesterday on mobile, so couldn't enjoy it properly.

About the story...it is well planned and properly organised. A lot of effort has gone into the making of this story. Loved it and kudos to all the writers. 👏

Maybe you could have avoided interchanging the real names of Abhijeet and Daya...sometimes it was a bit confusing and you girls also had to put the real names in brackets. This might have been an unnecessary twist.

This had a typical B P Singh flavour to it (his latest obsession with travel-related stories), but it wasn't meaningless like the 'Evening in Paris'. Everyone had a valid reason to visit different cities as part of a case.

I hope FW understands this. There has to be a solid plot. Our people cannot go running on the streets just to catch someone playing 'pass the parcel'.

Hope to see some more stories from you all.

Well done!!!! 👍🏼👏😃

I am not going to guess who wrote what, because someone has sat and made the writing style uniform throughout. Wish our beloved AC story writers had done something like this.

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago

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twinklesmiles

@-Twinkles-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

so far I read Bjavanab's post only...

@ bhavanab - nice story ... 👏👏

I liked the characters names Abhi-Daya exchanging real names with reel names 😛

Dr.Salunke de-coding the password - brilliant script 👏

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

@visrom thank you so much for appreciating our hardwork !!! Well coming to interchanging of name,sorry if it was confusing !!! We thought it'll be interesting !!! I myself loved that part a lot !! anyways one thing we kept in mind while making was that we shouldn't make traveling of the team meaningless,happy that it has happened !!!

Waise what about the coat ?? You liked it or not !!! It was for you and other Abhi sir fans who are irritated with it !! 😛 😉 and yeah well we knew you could make out our writing styles therefore we made the writing style uniform 😉 !!

@twinkle it's a single story sweety !!! Would be waiting for your comments once you finish !!!

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

The coat....Bhavana, see here the coat-burning was necessary as part of the case. So, I liked it that way, not because the coat was gone.

In general, if the coat is nice I don't mind Abhijeet wearing it. I only have a problem with the mismatching, ill-fitting coats. The one Abhijeet is wearing on your profile is actually ok.

(If you had mentioned in your story that it was the brown, velvetty coat - the Nanhi Gavah one, I would have jumped with joy😉.)

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

@visrom anyways happy that you liked our story re !!! That's the main part !! Thanks for the comments 😃

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

And one more thing - it's a bit 'disturbing' to imagine Abhijeet carrying a matchbox in his coat pocket. Why would someone carry a matchbox, unless......s/he has a dreaded bad habit?????

Maybe you could have thought of how Abhijeet managed to get a matchbox, without making him carry one in his pocket.

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Thanks for showing the mistake !!! 😆 !!! Nice to know you read it carefully and nicely !!!

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

No,no...it's not a mistake....just that I am a bit finicky about such stuff.

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Na na for me it's a mistake !!!! I can understand why you didn't like it !!! I read the whole story properly after being posted and that mujhe bhi khatka !!!!

Just try and guess na who write what !!

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

@Visrom Thanks for the commets we are waiting for that.It collective efforts well said Visrom.We are eqally contributed in each and every scene...yes part of the stories are written by differet person still while writing we were disscussing many times.so it blend properly.So no one can guess who is writer.Dear Dilrlbh ji Bong part is written by shgaaz is not that much right dear thogh she is from kolkata bangoli but still in those scenes also written by other writers.The other reason is all writers style is much more similer.so friends keep guessing who wrote wchich part.

Visrom ya sometime this question arises in my mind also but sometime de to story demand we need to add this stuff.but still we had taken lot of care whille adding this kind of stuff.

Anways thanks for encouraging us.Soon will came with new story yes but not BP ji type.

Edited by jiya1 - 14 years ago