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My internet is up and I have finally managed to read it properly once again. I read it yesterday on mobile, so couldn't enjoy it properly.
About the story...it is well planned and properly organised. A lot of effort has gone into the making of this story. Loved it and kudos to all the writers. 👏
Maybe you could have avoided interchanging the real names of Abhijeet and Daya...sometimes it was a bit confusing and you girls also had to put the real names in brackets. This might have been an unnecessary twist.
This had a typical B P Singh flavour to it (his latest obsession with travel-related stories), but it wasn't meaningless like the 'Evening in Paris'. Everyone had a valid reason to visit different cities as part of a case.
I hope FW understands this. There has to be a solid plot. Our people cannot go running on the streets just to catch someone playing 'pass the parcel'.
Hope to see some more stories from you all.
Well done!!!! 👍🏼👏😃
I am not going to guess who wrote what, because someone has sat and made the writing style uniform throughout. Wish our beloved AC story writers had done something like this.
Anupamaa
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