Jiya's Poems Station Good Bye All of You. - Page 3

Hats Off !! Jiya di sach mein aap best ho,kamaal ki ho !! Wow di kitne shiddat se aapne yeh poem likha !! sach meinDil ko chu gaya
I'm really telling you I've been moved to tears and have become emotional 😭 where's that team ?? that team created magic onscreen just by their presence

Nostalgia !!! sach mein this poem was a trip to the past !! aah !! Di i want to give you the world tightest hug 🤗 for this poem !! Sach mein di you made my day saari tension aur dukh mit gayi iss poem ko padhke,It was a journey to the past ek ek excellent episodes yaad aa gaye
Asha-Sudhakar I miss you both badly !!

and di last 2 stanza's ne dil jeet liya sach mein di you're the best !!!

Thanks bhavana...ab muze emotional mat karo..😭

WOW VERY NICE POEM ....GR8 JOB 😊

Wow. The excellent. Its would be insult to put up your poem in words. .

Its sweet journey in emotional way. Your thoughts are excellent.
Your new thread is gem.

great job once again jiya di 👏 i wonder even if this is a show, they could talk or show them in some episodes..like
abhijeet; daya tume yaad aarahahai..bohoth saal peheli is case jaise case humare paas aayatha..
daya; haan..kya din the voh..asha, sudhakar bhi humare saath thana..
freddy; hum toh kabhi bhi unse milnehi saki...chalo sir hum unse milne jaathehai...(and they go to meet them)
they could at least talk about them.. 😭 we really miss them..have seen some of the officers as side actors or criminals, but we want to see them back as officers 😭 can they return us those days 😭
jiya di..aap ke poem ne toh meri dil hi khush kardhiya..you are just great..you made us remember those days 🤗

Are tum log muze emotional kyo kar rahe ho...aisa kya kiya hein meine...muze rula denge kya

@ jiya re-read what you have written. I think you missed your own creation. kidding but yes re-read once from perspective of reader thinking someone else has written it. You will get answer

So wonderfully written, well structured and aptly evoking nostalgia. How apt to have it through ACP sir's point of view. Reading all the golden moments put into beautiful rhyme was wonderful! Amazing poem, Jiya, loved it! 😃

di aapka creation ek heera hai !! Its just too touching sach mein aapka yeh thread already superhit hai !! aapke saare creation bahut achche hothe hai but this is just superb !!