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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

shama,good to know that you are a great vivek fan....
And this story focus on him,nice to read....go ahead.well done yaar.i think you can give him some role,although cid people cant.

Edited by chinnu_manikyam - 15 years ago

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: chinnu_manikyam
shama,good to know that you are a great vivek fan....
And this story focus on him,nice to read....go ahead complete this.

LoL it has been completed yar

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Very Nice story... As it your first attempt and you are too young, So I must say it is an extra ordinary effort ... Some Loophole are Ok... As you will get older and get power to think better or get mature, everything will be improved with passage of time.. but for now it is just mind blowing and Superb effort.. keep it up and looking forward for many more from your side.. ⭐️

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: bhinder.kamboj

LoL it has been completed yar

i posted it before i read the last part.but i have edited it in seconds, never know you were here😆

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yasha

@CAHAT320

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

a nice starting dear but why hav you choosen poll for it...

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Shaama. Ure story is quite nice 😊 keep it up and well done! Just one suggestion- plz add the remaining part of ure story to the first post. ppl are watching ure first post without realising that u have completed ure story.... nevermind just an idea. carry on and bring another story 😊 and welcome to IF writers club!! 😆 😉

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shaama

@shaama

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: CAHAT320
a nice starting dear but why hav you choosen poll for it...

i didn' understand this 😕

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

now I have 3 stories to read I seriously need one good day to read them all.

I can just say only this at this time point of time-- I will definitely review it in next 7 days.

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You shouldn't know

@totallynotme101

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

how is it a poll??
but anyway..
story is good.
i like it..
waiting for ur next one.

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shaama

@shaama

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: bhinder.kamboj
Very Nice story... As it your first attempt and you are too young, So I must say it is an extra ordinary effort ... Some Loophole are Ok... As you will get older and get power to think better or get mature, everything will be improved with passage of time.. but for now it is just mind blowing and Superb effort.. keep it up and looking forward for many more from your side.. ⭐️

how did you know that i was young 😳

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