Story - CID on Vacation - Page 3

The CID officer will not die for sure after falling. May be there is something wrong in his/her cycle. What about "Mysterious Cycle" or "Raaz cycle ke"
[my hindi is bad, please don't mind]

This is not a story or promo but a suggestion , may be not good.
Now a days scenes with Daya and abhi became rare, may be the actors are not able to give enough time for CID. The Creative team can use it in this way:
One of new officers in CID have professional rivalry against Daya, say, and he has some plan against him. Abhi is aware of it and is pretending that he also has a reservation against Daya and is talking less to him just to expose that new comer.
May be I am not able to put it in a good way, but people with creativity can turn it into a good plot.

hey it seems really gr8... plz complete it soon

Originally posted by: m_kal2011

This is not a story or promo but a suggestion , may be not good.
Now a days scenes with Daya and abhi became rare, may be the actors are not able to give enough time for CID. The Creative team can use it in this way:
One of new officers in CID have professional rivalry against Daya, say, and he has some plan against him. Abhi is aware of it and is pretending that he also has a reservation against Daya and is talking less to him just to expose that new comer.
May be I am not able to put it in a good way, but people with creativity can turn it into a good plot.

😊 Hi! Your idea seems to be nice!! Y dont u write on it? Ure very idea shows u r creative!!! Come on, do write 😊

superb thought m_kall 2011 ur rally creative n more expressive one person with upcoming good ideas

visrom ur idea is also too good but pls do write up the story n dont make supense n wait for loooooooooooonnnnnnnng really eager to read more stories

Itna wait to SONY waalein bhi nahi karwaate😆😆😆 Visorm i hope u have started working on it..😃

Chalo yaar....ho gaya...read it and please give detailed comments.

A story with a difference- CID on a holiday! Wow factor is that u have managed to grab my attention and keep it hooked on to d story. The magic of ure story is in some of the dialogues! U managed to keep the plot fast-paced and fullof twists and turns. Yeah I did feel who d cuprit was but perhaps i was wrong! Keep it up Visrom dear! 😃

Originally posted by: drilabh

A story with a difference- CID on a holiday! Wow factor is that u have managed to grab my attention and keep it hooked on to d story. The magic of ure story is in some of the dialogues! U managed to keep the plot fast-paced and fullof twists and turns. Yeah I did feel who d cuprit was but perhaps i was wrong! Keep it up Visrom dear! 😃

Thanks yaar...hope others give some feedback too.