CID stories : By CHINNU - Page 7

i cant post a double " " this from my pc, cant have my lap now. but is that still unclear?

Originally posted by: chinnu_manikyam

i cant post a double " " this from my pc, cant have my lap now. but is that still unclear?

There is one picture which I am unable to see. And I'll read it later...now I am just too busy.

Hm. Okay. Interesting. Acp and Abhijeet behaviour justified well. I take back my earlier prosumption. U r a gud writer. Keep it up. Ure style may be different and ure characterization is done in a narrative manner... But u r gud 😊

Originally posted by: drilabh

Hm. Okay. Interesting. Acp and Abhijeet behaviour justified well. I take back my earlier prosumption. U r a gud writer. Keep it up. Ure style may be different and ure characterization is done in a narrative manner... But u r gud 😊

thank you so much friend.thanks for reading.

hey that was a nice story.. and daya was not dead hurrah... i was quiter worried

Originally posted by: rozeishere

hey that was a nice story.. and daya was not dead hurrah... i was quiter worried

thanks for reading @rozeishere

there are some reders of mine who waits for the last part.
its here for the last two days.

Hm. Okay. Interesting. Acp and Abhijeet behaviour justified well. I take back my earlier prosumption. U r a gud writer. Keep it up. Ure style may be different and ure characterization is done in a narrative manner..

I am soo sorry for replying late! Had missed the thread.
Chinnu very well done. The suspense was kept alive thorughout and Acp and Abhijeet's characterisations were also justified! Freddy's personality too was very well shown! Over all a good story. Great improvement from your first creation! Narration was quite clear. Logics used difficult to understand at one go... But yes veryy interesting! 👏

overall, nice narration... As always, very different from normal CID story writing! 😃

Originally posted by: Shagnika

I am soo sorry for replying late! Had missed the thread.
Chinnu very well done. The suspense was kept alive thorughout and Acp and Abhijeet's characterisations were also justified! Freddy's personality too was very well shown! Over all a good story. Great improvement from your first creation! Narration was quite clear. Logics used difficult to understand at one go... But yes veryy interesting! 👏

overall, nice narration... As always, very different from normal CID story writing! 😃

thanks shagee....
So u r not gonna shoot me eh? 😆