CID stories : By CHINNU - Page 9

Finally did read it. It was a good story...thanks for making a 'duplicate' Daya. I am sure Abhijeet would never have pushed Daya down a building and continued like nothing happened.

Just that scene where Daya (or the duplicate) is being tortured is a bit...you know...somehow I see our real Daya in that scene and start feeling the pain. 😆

Originally posted by: visrom

Finally did read it. It was a good story...thanks for making a 'duplicate' Daya. I am sure Abhijeet would never have pushed Daya down a building and continued like nothing happened.

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<p>Just that scene where Daya (or the duplicate) is being tortured is a bit...you know...somehow I see our real Daya in that scene and start feeling the pain. 😆

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Story was in the narrative form...different, but good anyway.👏

Do write more.

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thanks for reading.
Am inspired by your post.
As you like it,story queen.... 😊


And dont worry...daya is not hurt.

You build up suspense very well in first one with so many questions unanswered but and here you justified at cleared each and every thing. Loved that duplicate part. Although need to re-read few lines but could understand what you want to say. Your narration style is very different and good one.

Freddy resigning, oh poor Freddy never he has been part of plan like this, no one tells him plan.

codes were very good. Like them.
little confused over here--- May be I missed soemthing.
Could you just elaborate on this code
3582 4557 5668 4575 1112 2358 1215
finally they find MG Road on laptop.

and finally when she opened door question from Abhijeet was
is this acp pradyuman's home?'
I don't know I can't stop laughing had that lady replied he is your boss from last 11 years and you don't know.


overall I would say good end to suspense build. Keep it up. You are picking up in suspense. This story was improved one (actually very improved ) from the last attempt.

hi sunny....
thanks for reading yaar 😊
actually it was vivek who ask "is this acp pradyuman's home" . since the lady knows abhijit , i cant send him😆. she dont know vivek, i just want him to ask something.not serious thats all.

about the code
3582 4557 5668 4575 1112 2358 1215

That means for each 3582 4557 5668 4575 1112 2358 1215 they did this
and got MG Road?

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

That means for each 3582 4557 5668 4575
1112 2358 1215 they did this
and got MG Road?

no,only 3852 means mg rd.and all other numbers leads to some other places.in story abhijit recognises that the number and code word is of same color.so they can identify which no. Is for which place in map.

Hey chinnu sorry for the late reply you know I was out na ?? anyways coming to your story I took out some special time to read both the parts,after reading the first part I was like " What is this Chinnu upto ??" but then when I read the second part I was relieved !!

2nd part was indeed very interesting,I really love to read code word related stories and like breaking code etc. so I loved it even more !! Abhi sir,Daya sir,ACP sir all were awsome !! Freddy Sir-Aww !! he's indeed a sweetheart,ready to resign after what happened to Daya sir !!

Mainly your style of narration is beautiful,usually what happens is that we connect better with hindi stories because that's the language used in the show but that wasn't the case here,even after being in English it struck a chord beautifully.Your style of description is beautiful,every single point is taken into consideration,achcha hua you gave this story before 14th of Aug warna we really would have to go through a Behroopiya trauma on IF atleast though this was nothing less,I was saved as I read both without a gap 😛

anyways waiting to read more from you !!!

thank you so much for reading my story yaar....so happy to hear that....i have a feeling that some members do not read my story,but i know the reason is language.its difficult to imagine cid in english,but am so helpless.i cant write in hindi.thanks a lot for liking my narration.

Ok now will be sitting and reading it !!! 2 part story leaves me in tension !! but your stories have love description and explanation so want to take out special time to read it !!