CID stories : By CHINNU - Page 5

Originally posted by: chinnu_manikyam

hope you will not lose the excitement and shoot me,after reading the part2 dear 😆

If u say that everything shown in Part 1 is "true" then i cant granatee if i wont shoot u.. 😆 😆 Wont pardon u if u keep Abhijeet's character like this..even in the PART 2...and also show Daya on hospital bed almost dying...then...bachke rehna 😆 😆

Kidding!!!!

to tell you truth it was entertaining while I was reading with full curiosity but end is missing so to me its like half read. So many things which are shown or depicted in first part can change in second so just waiting.

Like I say how at this point this person behaved this way, and when I read second part I get the answer to my question. So before putting any review I want to read full, what new twist is ahead, curious to know.

So said don't hang for too many days but no rush take your own time as this story can have various twists and turns and you can do justice to it very well don't want that to be ruined. but then also in a week do it (my curiosity level)

Originally posted by: Shagnika

If u say that everything shown in Part 1 is "true" then i cant granatee if i wont shoot u.. 😆 😆 Wont pardon u if u keep Abhijeet's character like this..even in the PART 2...and also show Daya on hospital bed almost dying...then...bachke rehna 😆 😆

Kidding!!!!

behrupiya returns... 😆

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

to tell you truth it was entertaining while I was reading with full curiosity but end is missing so to me its like half read. So many things which are shown or depicted in first part can change in second so just waiting.

Like I say how at this point this person behaved this way, and when I read second part I get the answer to my question. So before putting any review I want to read full, what new twist is ahead, curious to know.

So said don't hang for too many days but no rush take your own time as this story can have various twists and turns and you can do justice to it very well don't want that to be ruined. but then also in a week do it (my curiosity level)

sure sunny,i will never break your curiosity level,will take 1week atmost.

Originally posted by: drilabh

you killed daya????? and then u will continue later???? another behrupia????? another agonizing wait for daya fans????? and i dunno, ure narration is nice but abhijeet behaving like ds..... well.... gud story but sad too.... and u brought prabha here??? nice move.....

where is part 2.. please give it soon ..daya is dead and i am waiting to see if he is brough back to life or burried like a normal human after he dies

chinnu well written...but again daya ko target....but let finesh or story then i will give u comments on this.

I can't believe what I read. You narrated beautifully but somewhere ACP and Abhijeet behaved out of characterbut to actually to say it is too hard to digest


dat it really happens
but truly to say it is really awsome

the stories which iread all tru the thread was all more more wonderful and superb butur thinking some wat more hilarious thinking n awesome n mind blowin
pls post more parts yaar im wating eagerly to read it
thank u

am honoured nisha.thanks for the complement.