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neelambari

@Chiinnu

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: CAHAT320
this story is really good........

thank you so much....

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Chinnu good work yaar,if this is your first attempt which is so good I'm sure that your next one will be awsome,your concept was different and plot was also nice,just one suggestion if there would've been a little more investigation the story would have been better, nevertheless is it is very good,hoping to read many more from you 👏

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Bhavanab
Chinnu good work yaar,if this is your first attempt which is so good I'm sure that your next one will be awsome,your concept was different and plot was also nice,just one suggestion if there would've been a little more investigation the story would have been better, nevertheless is it is very good,hoping to read many more from you 👏

thanks bhavana....i was waiting for ur suggestion....i will try my best next time....

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

hello..........
i am back with my second story.........😆
thanks everyone who liked and contributed their valuable suggestions.....

the poster release of my new story is given here.....😳
hope you like it......

starring
Daya
Abhijit
ACP
Fredy
Vivek

and introducing

ACP Ashok kanwar
And new forensic expert Prabha

👏Poster release👏

Edited by chinnu_manikyam - 15 years ago

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Afnaan Hussain

@dayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

wow!!! achha poster banaya aapne
it looks fantastic 👏

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: dayabhi
wow!!! achha poster banaya aapne
it looks fantastic 👏

thank u so much@dayabi

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

you killed daya????? and then u will continue later???? another behrupia????? another agonizing wait for daya fans????? and i dunno, ure narration is nice but abhijeet behaving like ds..... well.... gud story but sad too.... and u brought prabha here??? nice move.....

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

👏 👏 👏..awesome.........👏👏👏👏................
& 😲 😲 😲 😲...............how this happened daya sir pe doubt dal diya 😭 😭 😭 😭.................

hoping daya sir is fine..........😊 😊 😊............ doctor change karo 😆 😆 😆 😆 how can he say that......😆 😆 😆
hope to see daya sir back in next part........ 😃😃 😃
continue asap 😃