STORY CONTEST- 2(CASE OF THE MYSTERIOUS KIDNAPPER) - Page 43

Now coming to my experience.... I didnt know whether to participate or not... Wasnt sure i i wud b able to give enough time.Still, my name was put up... I was very excited as usual! The came Abhijeet in Coma n i completely forgot abt the contest! After all this, i got busy with something else... My visit to Mumbai preparartions! Told visrom that i wont get enough time to write the story as i wud b out of station n all that! But didnt want to hurt her... I returnes from my trip n after that it seemed impossible to concentrate on anything at all! Saw visrom crying emotions in every thread! So thot, better not say no... Or else, will hurt my di very much! Another prob that i was facing was i wasnt allowed to use the laptop at all! So bahana banake kuch kiya... N in just 2 days wrote the story! Was the fastest story i hav ever written! Plot dimaag mein ek din banaya... N next twodays wrote it at one go! I was happy to have particupated! Never expected that it will reach the top 3! Thank you everyone who gave reviews to my story! I will try n be much better next time!

Visrom, above all! Thank u very very very much! And the tightest hug... For u know what!!! 😉

No re Bhinder... Ur hindi is not bad!! What rubbish! Ur hindi is v good... A punjabi touch at times! Haan, spelling mein thodi bahut galti karte ho! But not many ppl know that cos ur creatiins are always chekd by u so many times b4 posting!!! 😉 😉 😉

Originally posted by: Shagnika

No re Bhinder... Ur hindi is not bad!! What rubbish! Ur hindi is v good... A punjabi touch at times! Haan, spelling mein thodi bahut galti karte ho! But not many ppl know that cos ur creatiins are always chekd by u so many times b4 posting!!! 😉 😉 😉

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It's great reading about all the experiences. 😊

Speaking about mine... I wasn't really sure whether I could do this well because I had never written stories as a fan before. But when I saw the plot, I thought I can have a go because I like political-themed thrillers and it also seemed like a good chance to do a closed room mystery, which I'm also interested in. I had to hurry a bit because I had to go back to study in a few days so I thought of about 3 or 4 different scenarios to work on.

I was used to writing stories in a longer script-like format so this one got a bit too long and I guess that was the main mistake, now after reading the other stories I've understood how I can trim it down and make it more concise. I didn't get enough time to go through the story a second time after writing it, so recently I discovered some mistakes in there too. It was a great experience reading through all the other stories, all were very unique scenarios and I've gotten inspiration to do better in the next contest. I'm also glad my story was liked, thank you everyone and looking forward to Story Contest 3! 😃

Story No. 3 and 9 I liked a lot detail analysis when I will be back. going for lunch. Then I liked story No. 6,10,1,11 equally. 6 has different plot never imgained to relate past. 10 has lot of suspense, 1 was first which I read and it impressed me just with one prob which I mentioned in my review. 11 I liked different idea to kidnap someone to save someone. The 5 have in it everything but was little lengthy.

8,2,. I liked few dialogues in these. and the way plot was set. 7 one was fast liked it.

I would love to discuss the dialogues and few scenes here of each story. really . when I will be back.

I read the stories mostly in the same order as they were put up (1-11). As I mentioned in my review, there was something unique about every story and I really appreciate that. For example stories 1 and 9 had a great deal of suspense and action which I really enjoyed, story 4 had a very well constructed plot and did a great job maintaining suspense till the end, story 6 appropriately brought ACP sir's back-story into the picture. I'll say that every story was very good - even the lowest rated story there is much better than quite some of the official CID plots during the last 2 years and that is a big achievement! 👍🏼

PS - I had recognised the disqualified story to be visom's after we discussed about Abhi sir's actions there. And, as I thought of it later, it's totally correct. Here's a double applause for organising the contest well and writing an exciting story at the same time! 👏👏😃