STORY CONTEST- 2(CASE OF THE MYSTERIOUS KIDNAPPER) - Page 26

Its better if u send it by tonight! Cos visrom is gonna come online again tomoro morn most probably! Amd she usually comes early! So better get over wid the ratings by 9 or 10 tonight! Or anytime but b4 tomoro morning!

priya_sparsha - And it would be great if you could give a review of all the stories too, Priya... 😊

Originally posted by: bhinder.kamboj

Finally God heard my Pray ..yoooooo 😛 Results is not declared while I was on Work... 😉

So yeh sab tumhaare wajah se hua!!! 😆

@ bhinder prayers are heard. aaj tumharii turn thi. but why this prayer?

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

@ bhinder prayers are heard. aaj tumharii turn thi. but why this prayer?

ajj maine kam pe jana tha na So I wished jab main online ho tab result declare ho 😆

Story 1:- nice story, interesting plot. Which I liked most, everyone got importance. Loved the suspense of the last scene. Keep it up.👏

Story 2:- good story, but suspense thoda kam tha! But the school scene is nice. Keep writing!👍🏼

Story 3:- For me, it's the best story of the contest! I don't like it, but loved it! The plot, the suspense, the twist in the story, and the emotional part, are simply WOW! Congratulations! I want to see it onscreen!🤗

Story 4:- nice story, a different one! Liked the plot. Keep writing!👍🏼

Story 5:- nice one, last scene was full of suspense. (A bit similar with "Khatra Chemical Bomb Ka")😆, but no problem! Really like it!👏

Story 6:- good story, liked the emotional moments. The clue was a different one! Keep writing!👍🏼

Story 7:- it was a good attempt, but for me, a bit confusing! Sabkuch itni jaldi ho gaya, ki thikse samajh nehi payi! But no problem, keep writing!👍🏼

Story 8:- very nice story, I must say. Really liked the ACP's roll. Keep it up!👍🏼

Story 9:- very good story, and Freddy got importance, which I like to see. But his escape was too easy! It's the only weak point, otherwise very nice story.👍🏼

Story 10:- The second best story for me! The Abhi-Daya scenes r too cute, loved it. Congratulations!🤗

Story 11:- Also a very nice story, loved each and every part. Keep it up!😃

yeh review Bhinder ke force karne par likh rahi hoon. actually I liked all stories.😉