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JP22

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#831

Thnks sneha for your reply...I have just made this poem but after correcting by Prabh di it's became more impressive...Thanks to prabha di...and sneha we never skip CID from our Life...its imporatant part of our life..love u too dear.

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JP22

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#832

Some thing Before reading this gazal

Dear Friends

I know I am not a gr8 poet but like to given and lerned somethisng new...so this time I wrote a gazal( malaum nahi kitani gazal hein)..since last few days me and one of my best friend trying to lerned how to write gazal...

there is some techniques,ryming oraganization for writing gazal..and it's really compex and critical need really a good poet..but still I thought I must ttry this thing and go through some articals in gazals...and try to adopt some basic techniques og gazals...

u all know I always share my all peoms of CID wheather good,Bad aur pathetic...es poem ke baare mein malum nahi u all decide how is it?

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JP22

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#833

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shaama

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Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#834

wow jiya di 👏 what a wonderful poem..i just loved it ❤️

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JP22

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#835

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JP22

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: shaama
wow jiya di 👏 what a wonderful poem..i just loved it ❤️

Thanks shama but this attempt was flop😆😆

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#837

Wah wah! Perfect poem....many of us witnessed the golden CID...rather true CID because of the re-runs. Sony's best decision till date.... 😃Ur poems are always dil se..thats what makes them special!! 👏

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#838

shaggz thank u lekin meri halat bhi FW ki jaisi huvi hein aaj kal kuch khas nahi hein mere pass dene ke liye...m totall blank...karana bahut chahati hun....mehenat bhi le rahi hn lekin sab kuch ukata plata....flop show ho gaya😆😆😆